r***i
发帖数: 200 | 1 其实就是下面这么断句的。比较口语化和节奏感，难道这是评委们看重的？
从意象上没有什么深刻的东西，总体感觉这个写的还不如一些摇滚歌词。故意卖弄了几
个词，比如lupine，但是和全诗合起来也没有形成什么深刻的形象。
就是他创造了一些词语的碎片，刻意而随意的组合起来，这个估计是评委觉得还不错的。
总体很一般，希望这不是美国青年诗人的所谓最高水平。
欧美诗人现在写的好的，包括瑞典的特朗斯特罗姆，爱尔兰的希尼。
这是Eryn Green的代表诗作“Page of Swords”：
So take care of yourself, learn how
to take better pictures, breathe
into your hips, braver please
give love credit for
the way I live
that call me
kind of feeling
frenzied, lupine,
the card I draw
blushing in your breast
pocket undressing
freedom I know you
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发帖数: 10658 | 2 谢谢小茶。电影其实本身很好看，真心地笑了很多回。剧本也写得很不错，比英雄后面
的那些强多了。只不过和莫言小说本意不一样。
不过已故美国著名影评人Roger Ebert只给《幸福时光》打了两颗星，很低的分数。他
说盲女在给工厂大叔们massage没有sex很不可思议，不过我和瞎导都觉得Roger没有理
解其中的悲剧意义。
节选两段Roger的影评，原文在http://www.rogerebert.com/reviews/happy-times-2002
The movie seems to come from a simpler, more innocent culture. There is
never a hint of sex in it, for one thing. The massages are completely chaste
, the men like them that way, and it never occurs to the girl that it is
creepy that she is giving massages to a bunch of a... 阅读全帖 |
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l***y
发帖数: 4671 | 3 来自主题: LeisureTime版 - 忍者与公主 说到庞德，他跑到意大利去支持法西斯主义，在意大利的电台上骂美国。二战末期他被
美军抓了。美国也觉得棘手，于是想出了一个办法：把他一个六十岁的老头子扔到一个
铁笼子里放在户外晒了 25 天，给晒傻了，于是说他精神状况不适合审讯，就把他送到
神经病院关了十二年，七十三岁才给放出来。
庞德翻译了大量的中文诗歌，尤其是李白和诗经，并且以似是而非著称。其实我觉得挺
好的，就跟《匈牙利舞曲》似的，一种可以创作的体例。
比如说这首《王风·中谷有蓷》
中谷有蓷，暵其干矣。
有女仳离，嘅其叹矣。
慨其矣，遇人之艰难矣。
中谷有蓷，暵其修矣。
有女仳离，条其歗矣。
条其歗矣，遇人之不淑矣。
中谷有蓷，暵其湿矣。
有女仳离，啜其泣矣。
啜其泣矣，何嗟及矣。
Ode 69
Dry grass, in vale:
"alas!
"I met a man, I
met
a man
"Scorched, alas, ere it could grow."
A lonely girl pours out her... 阅读全帖 |
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d*****d
发帖数: 10658 | 4 来自主题: LeisureTime版 - 忍者与公主 这个...有歪曲诗经温柔敦厚之嫌啊。第二首哪里那么直接undress的，把古人也写得太
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b*s
发帖数: 82482 | 5 来自主题: LeisureTime版 - 忍者与公主 凭什么古人不能猴急啊？你以为古人不是人啊
这个...有歪曲诗经温柔敦厚之嫌啊。第二首哪里那么直接undress的，把古人也写得太
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wh
发帖数: 141625 | 6 我帮你把歌和你qq上的歌词贴过来，歌词是你翻译的吗？真用心啊。歌很好听。歌词是
放浪形骸的女人追悔虚掷的青春，叹息无家的现状，感觉稍有点不太实；唱歌的嗓子很
温柔甜美，不像野性女子更像贤妻良母，呵呵。
另外发帖可以首发一个版面，然后点击帖子上方的“转贴”，转载到其他版面。
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QhQWND9jKDA
《I've never been to me 》
(Written by Ron Miller and Kenneth Hirsch, Sing by Charlene Marilynn D'
Angelo）
<未曾有自我>
演唱by 夏琳·邓肯, 词曲by Ron Miller 和 Kenneth Hirsch
Hey lady, you, lady, cursing at your life 嘿，这位太太，你这对自己的生命
充满怨恨的太太
You're a discontented mother and a regimented wife 你是个不满现实的母亲，
是个失去自由的妻子
I've no doubt... 阅读全帖 |
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wh
发帖数: 141625 | 7 嗯，我理解的就是那个歧义——没去看原文，呵呵。
我贴过的印度khajuraho雕塑，里面有个undressing非常优雅，所以大大淡化了冯唐这
句翻译带给我的恶感 :P
新年快乐！ |
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w**a
发帖数: 3510 | 8 Both women fully undressed. But story doesn't make sense though, the women
can be the girl's mom. |
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G**Y
发帖数: 33224 | 9 Harwell, 20, was perhaps as clever as he was creepy in carrying out his
alleged crimes. Police said he installed software on female clients' Macs
that would send error pop-ups that instructed them to "fix their internal
sensor soon," and "try putting your laptop near hot steam for several
minutes to clean the sensor."
Some of the alleged victims would take their laptops in to the bathroom
while they showered as a result, authorities said.
The messages did catch the attention of one of the allege... 阅读全帖 |
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N**D
发帖数: 10322 | 13 this website has nothing but ads |
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m**i
发帖数: 9848 | 16 貌似要装插件啊，好像也可以在megaupload下载，正准备下。
update:
下好了，能看，就是口味有点重…… |
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j****i
发帖数: 68152 | 18 2011 Ultra-pull personality signature, very calm and use Keguan remember!
Guide words: Many people are used to write in the signature
characteristics of their own statements, but the more traditional language
has been
OUT, now for everyone to send the signature 2011 ultra-pull personality,
like Take it!
1, "I love you," the acronym "WAN" just spell "end" word. This story
tells us that if
You love someone, you're finished.
2, Zheng name: surname is high, his girlfriend surnamed Guo, p... 阅读全帖 |
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t***i
发帖数: 26 | 19 taoui: 16 double X beers
Just for fun, I think I will start to write down some stories about massage
girls and clients. All stories are true with appropriate changes to hide my
client’s identities.
H
I can't forget him. Maybe he will stay in my heart a long time.
When I first time saw him, I just teased with him, and starred into his eyes
….
"Hey, your eyes are so blue!"
He is 6'1 I think, a few extra pounds in the middle but not that much.
I have always liked colored eyes, especially when the... 阅读全帖 |
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p********7
发帖数: 18007 | 21 First time posting a story on here. Apologize for my grammar. Will try keep
it short and sweet.
A little bit of background. I am a foreigner working in China and been
staying here for quite a while. As those who have been to China would know,
as a foreigner, you get a lot of attentions from the locals. A lot of women
are interested and easily attracted. Finding a date within your social
circle or workplace is easy and same goes for picking up girls at the bars /
clubs (if not easier).
I am not b... 阅读全帖 |
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b******z
发帖数: 387 | 22 Sleeping In My Car
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MDjdMxHHmF4
I'll tell you what I've done
I'll tell you what I'll do
Been driving all nite just to get close to you
Baby babe - i'm moving so fast
You'd better come on
The moon is alright
The freeway's heading south
My heart is going boom!
There's a strange taste in my mouth
Baby babe - i'm moving real fast
So try to hold on
Try to hold on!
Sleeping in my car - I will undress you
Sleeping in my car - I will caress you
Staying in the back seat of m |
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K****N
发帖数: 10783 | 23 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q2PeqqNi9bA
Market in the cool white mornin'
Merchants sell as ladies buy
Milk, tobacco, soap and matches
Sweep the floor
While the dishes dry
Spring whispered in her ear
Like soft Mediterranean wailin'
Sleepy woman by the window
Dreamin' in the morning air
Of the man who takes her sweetness
By a chinese lamp upstairs
The steam of China tea
You could hear the woman sing
In the soft flames of spring
Spring has swept the scarlet side streets
Winds caress, undress, in |
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w***r
发帖数: 7173 | 24 赞。
谁再写一篇 “我最爱 undress” ？ |
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x*****a
发帖数: 7797 | 25 Saturday morning I got up early, quietly dressed, made my lunch, grabbed the
dog, and slipped quietly into the garage. I hooked up the boat up to the
truck, and proceeded to back out into a torrential downpour. The wind was
blowing 50 mph, so I pulled back into the garage, turned on the radio, and
discovered that the weather would be bad all day.
I went back into the house, quietly undressed, and slipped back
into bed. I cuddled up to my wife's back, now with a different
anticipation, ... 阅读全帖 |
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G**Y
发帖数: 33224 | 26 【 以下文字转载自 PhotoGear 讨论区 】
发信人: GGYY (唧唧歪歪), 信区: PhotoGear
标 题: 果粉们，新偶像诞生了【zz】
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Thu Jun 9 00:09:08 2011, 美东)
Harwell, 20, was perhaps as clever as he was creepy in carrying out his
alleged crimes. Police said he installed software on female clients' Macs
that would send error pop-ups that instructed them to "fix their internal
sensor soon," and "try putting your laptop near hot steam for several
minutes to clean the sensor."
Some of the alleged victims would take their laptops in... 阅读全帖 |
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m******t
发帖数: 4077 | 27 【 以下文字转载自 Living 讨论区 】
发信人: agi (hit for winners), 信区: Living
标 题: Home Depot Scam (转载)
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Tue Jul 19 10:19:25 2011, 美东)
发信人: agi (hit for winners), 信区: MedicalDevice
标 题: Home Depot Scam
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Tue Jul 19 10:18:13 2011, 美东)
You and I need to remain vigilant!
It's a jungle out there.
A little holiday heads-up for those of you who may be regular Home Depot
customers:
Over the last month I became a victim of a clever scam while shopping.
Simply going out to get supplies has... 阅读全帖 |
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s**********d
发帖数: 36899 | 28 【 以下文字转载自 Living 讨论区 】
发信人: agi (hit for winners), 信区: Living
标 题: Home Depot Scam (转载)
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Tue Jul 19 10:19:25 2011, 美东)
发信人: agi (hit for winners), 信区: MedicalDevice
标 题: Home Depot Scam
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Tue Jul 19 10:18:13 2011, 美东)
You and I need to remain vigilant!
It's a jungle out there.
A little holiday heads-up for those of you who may be regular Home Depot
customers:
Over the last month I became a victim of a clever scam while shopping.
Simply going out to get supplies has... 阅读全帖 |
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G*****y
发帖数: 2768 | 29 A Chinese man arranged for a hooker to come to his room for the evening.
Once in the room they undressed, climbed into bed, and went at it. When
finished, the Chinese man jumped up, ran over to the window, took a deep
breath, dove under the bed, climbed out the other side, jumped back into bed
with the hooker and commenced a repeat performance.
The hooker was impressed with the gusto of the second encounter. When
finished, the Chinese man jumped up, ran over to the window, took a deep
breath, do... 阅读全帖 |
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w******g
发帖数: 2047 | 30 An elderly couple, Margaret and Bert, moved to Texas. Bert always wanted a
pair of authentic cowboy boots, so, seeing some on sale, he bought them and
wore them home.
Walking proudly, he sauntered into the kitchen and said to his wife, "Notice
anything different about me?"
Margaret looked him over. "Nope."
Frustrated, Bert stormed off into the bathroom, undressed and walked back
into the kitchen completely naked except for the boots. Again he asked
Margaret, a little louder this time, "Notice an... 阅读全帖 |
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G*********r
发帖数: 538 | 31 SIMPLE TRUTH 1
Partners help each other undress before sex.
However after sex, they always dress on their own.
Moral of the story: In life, no one helps you once you're screwed.
SIMPLE TRUTH 2
When a lady is pregnant, all her friends touch the stomach and saying "
congrats".
But, none of them come and touch the man's penis and say "Good job".
Moral of the story: "Hard work is never appreciated." |
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m*f
发帖数: 8162 | 32 美国纽泽西州男子威纳（RichardWeiner）及妻子本月6日对2名房仲林德赛（
RobertLindsay）及费兰（JeannemariePhelan）提出告诉。事源于2010年年初，林德赛
向威纳夫妇游说，他们的空屋可以卖65万美元（约1952万元台币）。威纳夫妇在2011年
12月，正式将房子托给他们代售。2名房仲不但没有带客人看屋，反而把这间屋子当成2
人的性爱小屋，在2011年12月27日至2012年1月23日期间，2人至少在屋内嘿咻10次，尴
尬的是全都被隐藏式监视器录下来，地点还不光是在卧室床上。后来威纳太太有一天在
监视器画面上，看到2名可疑人士进入屋内，就报警处理。警察赶到现场，发现林德赛
正在拉裤子，显然刚刚与费兰翻云覆雨完事。威纳夫妇发现，他们的房子在市面行情约
40万美元（约1200万元台币），林德赛显然故意提高房价，让买家却步，把屋子变成自
己私人使用。
【 以下文字转载自 NewJersey 讨论区 】
发信人: LaborLaw (Law), 信区: NewJersey
标 题: 这两个agent太强大了!
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Sun De... 阅读全帖 |
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k*******2
发帖数: 4163 | 33
想起一个笑话：
Jones took his nymphomaniac wife to the doctor for treatment. "This is one
hot potato of a lady, doctor," he said. "Maybe you can do something for her?
She goes for any man, and I get very jealous."
"We'll see," the doctor said. He directed Mrs. Jones into his examining room
, closed the door behind him and told her to undress. Then he told her to
get up onto the examining table on her stomach.
The moment he touched her buttocks, she began to moan and squirm. It was too
much for him to ... 阅读全帖 |
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i***h
发帖数: 12655 | 34 床铺右翼势力疯狂抹黑
但是浦西的潮流浩浩荡荡不可阻挡
外国友人纷纷竖起大拇指，目标店OK |
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t***s
发帖数: 4666 | 35 我们这儿的dressing room 怎么好像都不分男女的？ |
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G**Y
发帖数: 33224 | 36 本来就不分。都是单间。Target傻B非要跳出来说我们这是专门为trans准备的。
当然还有厕所问题。 |
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a***e
发帖数: 27968 | 37 标题太不PC了
啥叫man caught？尼玛是self-identified transwoman有没有
★ 发自iPhone App: ChineseWeb 13 |
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s**********d
发帖数: 36899 | 38 上次我在dillards女装试衣室门外等老婆，店员老太还不让，要我躲远点。。。 |
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a***e
发帖数: 27968 | 39 你是不是眼神太闪烁了？
★ 发自iPhone App: ChineseWeb 13 |
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S*********g
发帖数: 24893 | 41 【 以下文字转载自 USANews 讨论区 】
发信人: StephenKing (金博士), 信区: USANews
标 题: 完了！trump被起诉强奸13岁小女孩！
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Tue Oct 4 00:21:09 2016, 美东)
http://occupydemocrats.com/2016/10/03/new-witness-just-came-forward-trumps-child-rape-lawsuit/
总结一下：
trump被控强奸13岁小女孩，有新的人证站出来了。
trump对未成年女孩表示出极大的兴趣，包括对未成年的帕丽斯。希尔顿和伊凡卡。川
普。
trump观赏了帕丽斯。希尔顿性交录像，并评价伊凡卡。川普的乳房。
The lawsuit accusing Republican nominee Donald Trump of raping a thirteen-
year-old girl has just been refiled in a New York court with a new witness.
The allega... 阅读全帖 |
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f***t
发帖数: 2247 | 42 【 以下文字转载自 Military 讨论区 】
发信人: xaa7 (xaa), 信区: Military
标 题: 女教师以上哈佛为诱饵，勾引男学生
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Fri Feb 9 17:34:39 2018, 美东)
A former counselor and swim coach at Malvern Prep School was arrested
Wednesday on charges of sexually assaulting a student at the private, all-
boys high school.
Emily Feeney, 40, of Wayne, is accused of attempting to seduce a 16-year-old
student swimmer by various means while working as the school's director of
college counseling, including promising to help him secure ad... 阅读全帖 |
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j******3
发帖数: 18319 | 43 Videos
Lana Del Rey
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cE6wxDqdOV0
第一次觉得性感的歌。百听不厌。
Swinging in the backyard
Pull up in your fast car
Whistling my name
Open up a beer
And you say, Get over here
And play a video game
I'm in his favourite sun dress
Watching me get undressed
Take that body downtown
I say you the bestest
Lean in for a big kiss
Put his favourite perfume on
Go play a video game
It's you, it's you, it's all for you
Everything I do
I tell you all the time
Heaven is a place on earth with you
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l******8
发帖数: 9475 | 44 帮助行动不便的人。 我一直想给我妈妈训一只辅助犬。
我觉得最难训的是： 狗趴下后不动， 见其它动物后不追。
下面这些项目ID可以很快学会。
http://happytailsservicedogs.com/uncategorized/service-dogs/
Service Dogs
Service dogs can assist individuals with physical disabilities by:
Picking up dropped items or items told to retrieve
Holding items for you
Carry items for you, even to another room
Opening/Closing household doors
Fetching a cane, walker, braces, crutches or other equipment
Assistance with undressing – removing shoes, coat or othe... 阅读全帖 |
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