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e*e
发帖数: 6808 | 2 i feel exactly the same!
xiner的陈词就是一个劲的夸自己，这是选总统，不是miss america。这不是audience
想要听的 |
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e*e
发帖数: 6808 | 3 实事求是的说，我没觉得
但是nornor写的比xiner的更诚恳 |
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c******s
发帖数: 2508 | 4 xiner当然还是写得好些，不过nornor的评价的确也很到位 |
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f**********g
发帖数: 4709 | 5 我觉得，可能xiner这个例子用的有点不是特别恰当
当然这个例子对启发nornor写作方面来说是很有用的
可是竞选，貌似更多是比谁说的更好吗？更有说服力？nornor就比较擅长了
所以情形就是，nornor对他熟悉的和擅长的东西，就写的很快很好
有些不熟悉的题目，可能无从下笔，这个就得多练习了 |
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c*****y
发帖数: 7647 | 6 pat pat xiner.
改一下标题吧，加上请勿转载。 |
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c*****y
发帖数: 7647 | 7 看了nornor的文章，严谨，言之有物，羡慕，向往，同时好奇小妞能写出什么样的东东
来。跟风已经在当妈的血液里了。。。。
我：“baby, you know the election day right?"
妞："yeah, the ads were everywhere. "
我："if you want to be elected as president, what would you do？"
妞："what do you mean？"
我："like Tim Bishop and Randy Altschuler, what did they say to people on
radio to get people vote for them?"
妞："they say bad things about the other one”
我：“。。。。。。 anyway， what would you do to get people vote you as
president？"
然后下面大作横空出世。。 |
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L******8
发帖数: 4093 | 8 亲娘啊。俺们家的是祖宗们开始 blah blah blah blah ............
后娘我：去跟daddy说说，妈妈我实在没时间now。 |
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s***s
发帖数: 1841 | 9 zan knows Tim Bishop etc
我们家娃那天问:"president是什么？” |
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c*****y
发帖数: 7647 | 10 I would go around the city and knock on peoples doors. I would get a website for people to see how smart and creative I am. I would put signs that say: VOTE FOR CLAIRE. I would go on the radio.
If I were president I would say that summer vacation would be every other year, because one some kids like school, and two，the kids can learn more. I like school because I like to be a smart kid and a popular kid. Vote for me. I promise I will do good deeds for America. I might even let you be vice presid... 阅读全帖 |
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s***s
发帖数: 1841 | 11 太赞了啊
给实惠地
比口号派对俺的胃口啊
website
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c*****y
发帖数: 7647 | 15 又不要你费劲写。就是一句话嘛。 嘻嘻。让我写我也是不肯写的。 |
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s*******l
发帖数: 4870 | 18 羡慕得吐血了，为什么都是六岁的孩子可可那么有条理，那么成熟啊？
我已经决定不推写作了，娃娃太幼稚，没法推
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j****m
发帖数: 3137 | 19 perfect for running school government ya, Zan 6 year old claire
website
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x***r
发帖数: 1523 | 20 说茄子的同学们：可可可是比我们家的小好几岁
瞧人家写的，再看看我们满篇的拼写错误，无地自容呀！！！
website
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M*****h
发帖数: 890 | 21 wow,可可真牛啊！写的这么牛，想的这么牛！！
website
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c*****y
发帖数: 7647 | 22 我觉得可可挺幼稚的，她基本上就不知道president是干什么的。
还有我们家的一出口，不是威胁就是利诱，mirror，汗。 |
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c*****y
发帖数: 7647 | 23 1岁吧。
我们的拼写错误我没有放上来而已。太多了，麻烦。。 :) |
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b****s
发帖数: 10197 | 25 wow!可可写得太好了！
website for people to see how smart and creative I am. I would put signs
that say: VOTE FOR CLAIRE. I would go on the radio.
year, because one some kids like school, and two，the kids can learn more. I
like school because I like to be a smart kid and a popular kid. Vote for me
. I promise I will do go |
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x********o
发帖数: 1741 | 26 我们家的，用数字说话，虽然数学实在不咋样，愣是少写了个零，被我笑话了半天。
website for people to see how smart and creative I am. I would put signs
that say: VOTE FOR CLAIRE. I would go on the radio.
year, because one some kids like school, and two，the kids can learn more. I
like school because I like to be a smart kid and a popular kid. Vote for me
. I promise I will do good deeds for America. I might even let you be vice
president and one day you could be president. I can go around America making
good deeds for a while. And if y... 阅读全帖 |
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s*u
发帖数: 1778 | 29 牛啊！！！Claire肯定是特别特别popular的cheerleader那个地位的 |
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g****n
发帖数: 1786 | 30 sz!
website for people to see how smart and creative I am. I would put signs
that say: VOTE FOR CLAIRE. I would go on the radio.
year, because one some kids like school, and two，the kids can learn more. I
like school because I like to be a smart kid and a popular kid. Vote for me
. I promise I will do good deeds for America. I might even let you be vice
president and one day you could be president. I can go around America making
good deeds for a while. And if you do a good job, you could be my ... 阅读全帖 |
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c*****y
发帖数: 7647 | 31 化得太棒了！！！！！
你这个贴埋没在这里实在太可惜了！
应该单独开个主题！
I
me
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j****m
发帖数: 3137 | 32 9090, where is the drawing? |
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c******s
发帖数: 2508 | 33 keke太牛了！写得真好
连挨家敲门都知道！
website for people to see how smart and creative I am. I would put signs
that say: VOTE FOR CLAIRE. I would go on the radio.
year, because one some kids like school, and two，the kids can learn more. I
like school because I like to be a smart kid and a popular kid. Vote for me
. I promise I will do go |
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j****e
发帖数: 1782 | 34 wow. very nice indeed ah!
website for people to see how smart and creative I am. I would put signs
that say: VOTE FOR CLAIRE. I would go on the radio.
year, because one some kids like school, and two，the kids can learn more. I
like school because I like to be a smart kid and a popular kid. Vote for me
. I promise I will do good deeds for America. I might even let you be vice
president and one day you could be president. I can go around America making
good deeds for a while. And if you do a good... 阅读全帖 |
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w*******e
发帖数: 2150 | 35 nod nod, keep this for her school election ! very nice! |
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x********o
发帖数: 1741 | 36 代amie谢谢烟姨夸奖！~
只不过是after school随笔涂鸦而已，让老妈用来凑热闹还不错。 |
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f**********g
发帖数: 4709 | 37 行动派啊
赞smart kid like school
website for people
to see how smart and creative I am. I would put signs that say: VOTE FOR
CLAIRE. I would
go on the radio.
year, because
one some kids like school, and two，the kids can learn more. I like school
because I like
to be a smart kid and a popular kid. Vote for me. I promise I will do good
deeds for
America. I might even let you be vice president and one day you could be
president. I can
go around America making good deeds for a while. And if you do a goo... 阅读全帖 |
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wy
发帖数: 14511 | 40 来自主题: _PerfectMoms版 - 请教一下 这个是坑王。xiner是坑后 |
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wy
发帖数: 14511 | 41 你和xiner今天在玩什么？很凶险的样子，搞得我不敢发言阿 |
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s*******l
发帖数: 4870 | 42 trust me
你老公的长相和这个俱乐部里面的老公们比绝对是数一数二了
也就输给xiner的黎明吧 |
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j******a
发帖数: 179 | 43 0 DowJones
0 i999
0 LADYQIAN
0 mommy
0 PerfectMom
0 starsea
0 szbd
3 micekiller
6 burt
6 choochoo
6 Swell
12 yacoo
15 lisa
19 wypt
22 doudouma
22 jinjinma
24 AppleMartini
33 kubuntu
41 angelfish
41 IAYA
41 liuyue
45 eraera
45 hdtv
49 hzhch
56 pang
64 aily
64 Aliu
82 xiaoluohao
83 floatmeeting
86 cheerios
87 pistone
93 garden
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c*****y
发帖数: 7647 | 44 bless【 在 xiner (心儿) 的大作中提到: 】 |
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j******a
发帖数: 179 | 48 0 DowJones
0 eraera
0 floatmeeting
0 hdtv
0 joymom
0 LADYQIAN
0 mommy
0 PerfectMom
0 starsea
0 szbd
0 yacoo
1 choochoo
1 i999
1 liuyue
3 burt
3 micekiller
13 AppleMartini
15 jinjinma
18 IAYA
19 aily
25 doudouma
28 kubuntu
28 svu
36 greenleaf
43 wuapple
46 xiner
48 cheerios
49 AutumnMM
54 Cacophony
59 Aliu
62 credit
63 ange... 阅读全帖 |
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c*****y
发帖数: 7647 | 49 我觉得她可能infer xiner不想帮这个忙，怕麻烦。
不会签婚前协议也可以infer要求签这个就是对对方的不信任。 |
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x****z
发帖数: 3473 | 50 infer是指没有说出来的话。人家跟xiner不熟，不知道她是那么好的热心人，以为不愿
意又不想直说。乐意帮忙这话就算真不乐意，很多人还是会说的，hehe |
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