我的朋友申请mba，我不好评断，请大家给essay打打分，这样的英文是啥水平？
能进啥水平的学校？
Q1: What are your goals and how will an MBA help you achieve them?
My primary career objective is to become the Chief Financial Officer of a
large international company that will provide me with opportunities and
challenges.
I made this decision several years ago while working as the Senior Financial
Manager of *** company in China. After working as a Senior Financial
Manager for two years, I was promoted to Financial Controller. I matured
quickl
