a***e 发帖数: 2094 | 1 music is an old song: abrazame (edited to desired length) |
M*****e 发帖数: 1827 | 2 赞!
非常好啊,跟人说只跳了两年肯定没人信,hoho
你让我提意见,仔细想,非要提的话就三点
1.上身和上肢动作稍嫌soft了一些,应该加些tone. 下肢基本功不错,看得出功力
2.基本功不错,figure都做得很好,但是动作之间衔接得地方需要加强。刚开始时
比较明显,spin结束得地方比较明显。可以仔细慢动作看录像,找出那些地方,专门练
3.show me the love. hoho,离得远看不清楚,但是觉得你和舞伴的感情交流太少
比如sliding door, 他看你,你不看他。一个mental image可以帮助解决这点:跳
伦巴的时候想象着你是在用你的脚踝,躯干一遍遍告诉你的舞伴你有多爱他。
总结一下,非常非常好。比我好多了,本来都不好意思提意见的......
【在 a***e 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : music is an old song: abrazame (edited to desired length)
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f****n 发帖数: 4615 | 3 你是那个女生???
跳的真不错
【在 a***e 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : music is an old song: abrazame (edited to desired length)
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f****n 发帖数: 4615 | 4
【在 M*****e 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 赞! : 非常好啊,跟人说只跳了两年肯定没人信,hoho : 你让我提意见,仔细想,非要提的话就三点 : 1.上身和上肢动作稍嫌soft了一些,应该加些tone. 下肢基本功不错,看得出功力 : 2.基本功不错,figure都做得很好,但是动作之间衔接得地方需要加强。刚开始时 : 比较明显,spin结束得地方比较明显。可以仔细慢动作看录像,找出那些地方,专门练 : 3.show me the love. hoho,离得远看不清楚,但是觉得你和舞伴的感情交流太少 : 比如sliding door, 他看你,你不看他。一个mental image可以帮助解决这点:跳 : 伦巴的时候想象着你是在用你的脚踝,躯干一遍遍告诉你的舞伴你有多爱他。 : 总结一下,非常非常好。比我好多了,本来都不好意思提意见的......
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m*******r 发帖数: 168 | 5 赞啊!!!我两年时还奋力地想怎么才能进的syllabus决赛那???
【在 a***e 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : music is an old song: abrazame (edited to desired length)
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m*******r 发帖数: 168 | 6 这对那舞伴同理吗?哎,终于明白了。难怪象我这样两只脚腕子都崴过N次的缺少天份
,跳不好。。。
【在 M*****e 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 赞! : 非常好啊,跟人说只跳了两年肯定没人信,hoho : 你让我提意见,仔细想,非要提的话就三点 : 1.上身和上肢动作稍嫌soft了一些,应该加些tone. 下肢基本功不错,看得出功力 : 2.基本功不错,figure都做得很好,但是动作之间衔接得地方需要加强。刚开始时 : 比较明显,spin结束得地方比较明显。可以仔细慢动作看录像,找出那些地方,专门练 : 3.show me the love. hoho,离得远看不清楚,但是觉得你和舞伴的感情交流太少 : 比如sliding door, 他看你,你不看他。一个mental image可以帮助解决这点:跳 : 伦巴的时候想象着你是在用你的脚踝,躯干一遍遍告诉你的舞伴你有多爱他。 : 总结一下,非常非常好。比我好多了,本来都不好意思提意见的......
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c*******l 发帖数: 4801 | 7 aurae,这个是你吗?
很棒啊!!
就是胳膊力量稍微软了点。
去gym练练胳膊吧,卡卡卡
【在 a***e 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : music is an old song: abrazame (edited to desired length)
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c*******l 发帖数: 4801 | 8 说2年 估计要气s一批人,哈哈哈哈哈
【在 M*****e 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 赞! : 非常好啊,跟人说只跳了两年肯定没人信,hoho : 你让我提意见,仔细想,非要提的话就三点 : 1.上身和上肢动作稍嫌soft了一些,应该加些tone. 下肢基本功不错,看得出功力 : 2.基本功不错,figure都做得很好,但是动作之间衔接得地方需要加强。刚开始时 : 比较明显,spin结束得地方比较明显。可以仔细慢动作看录像,找出那些地方,专门练 : 3.show me the love. hoho,离得远看不清楚,但是觉得你和舞伴的感情交流太少 : 比如sliding door, 他看你,你不看他。一个mental image可以帮助解决这点:跳 : 伦巴的时候想象着你是在用你的脚踝,躯干一遍遍告诉你的舞伴你有多爱他。 : 总结一下,非常非常好。比我好多了,本来都不好意思提意见的......
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l**********d 发帖数: 51 | 9 连续旋转的时候留头再久一点应该可以转得更快的
【在 M*****e 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 赞! : 非常好啊,跟人说只跳了两年肯定没人信,hoho : 你让我提意见,仔细想,非要提的话就三点 : 1.上身和上肢动作稍嫌soft了一些,应该加些tone. 下肢基本功不错,看得出功力 : 2.基本功不错,figure都做得很好,但是动作之间衔接得地方需要加强。刚开始时 : 比较明显,spin结束得地方比较明显。可以仔细慢动作看录像,找出那些地方,专门练 : 3.show me the love. hoho,离得远看不清楚,但是觉得你和舞伴的感情交流太少 : 比如sliding door, 他看你,你不看他。一个mental image可以帮助解决这点:跳 : 伦巴的时候想象着你是在用你的脚踝,躯干一遍遍告诉你的舞伴你有多爱他。 : 总结一下,非常非常好。比我好多了,本来都不好意思提意见的......
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a***e 发帖数: 2094 | 10 Wow, 慧眼慧眼! 不愧是Musique. These are big big problems I have.
3.show me the love. hoho,离得远看不清楚,但是觉得你和舞伴的感情交流太少 |
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a***e 发帖数: 2094 | 11 那也不是啊,好多人两年后就semi-retire没空跳了,到第三年时,舞龄还是两年。
【在 c*******l 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 说2年 估计要气s一批人,哈哈哈哈哈
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a***e 发帖数: 2094 | 12 yeah...that's spotting, which i am still trying to improve.
【在 l**********d 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 连续旋转的时候留头再久一点应该可以转得更快的
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c*******l 发帖数: 4801 | 13 true
该停就要停,该动就要启动快
【在 l**********d 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 连续旋转的时候留头再久一点应该可以转得更快的
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a***e 发帖数: 2094 | 14 Yes, I understand, instead of always hitting figures by 2-3-4-1, (s)he wants
to see 2-3-and-4-and-1, or 2-and-3-and-a-4-1-and, etc. That is advanced
timing, which is a part of dynamics. The basic figures are what they are,
but you can put in dynamics to change the feeling of it by using different
timing, accent and emphasis. There's infinite permutation. A good
choreographer can get nice pieces out. That will finally lead to building
one's own style. For New York, it is not necessarily always a
【在 l**********d 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 连续旋转的时候留头再久一点应该可以转得更快的
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w**********p 发帖数: 559 | 15 Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! ^_^
【在 a***e 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : Yes, I understand, instead of always hitting figures by 2-3-4-1, (s)he wants : to see 2-3-and-4-and-1, or 2-and-3-and-a-4-1-and, etc. That is advanced : timing, which is a part of dynamics. The basic figures are what they are, : but you can put in dynamics to change the feeling of it by using different : timing, accent and emphasis. There's infinite permutation. A good : choreographer can get nice pieces out. That will finally lead to building : one's own style. For New York, it is not necessarily always a
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o********y 发帖数: 1138 | 16
Great job! I wish I could improve as fast as you have .... anyway, since you
asked me for comments: people on the board have said a lot of positive
things about this clip and I agree with all of them. As to the areas to
improve, most people already mentioned the arms being too soft too wavy, I
guess you got the message so I won't talk more about it. Just a few small
things I noticed:
1. You didn't seem to spot very well when you did your spins, which gave a
slightly unstable impression
2. Your
【在 a***e 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : Yes, I understand, instead of always hitting figures by 2-3-4-1, (s)he wants : to see 2-3-and-4-and-1, or 2-and-3-and-a-4-1-and, etc. That is advanced : timing, which is a part of dynamics. The basic figures are what they are, : but you can put in dynamics to change the feeling of it by using different : timing, accent and emphasis. There's infinite permutation. A good : choreographer can get nice pieces out. That will finally lead to building : one's own style. For New York, it is not necessarily always a
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n**m 发帖数: 561 | 17 Passion, more passion.我觉得Rumba之所以美,就在于两个人之间若即若离复杂的感情
纠节. 舞蹈是用来宣泄情感的. |
l**********d 发帖数: 51 | 18 agree, for 3, i think it is about something like delayed walks may help.
http://www.dancesport.uk.com/tid-bits/issue079.htm |
a***e 发帖数: 2094 | 19 yeah i agree, it's just my body doesn't listen to me sometimes...
【在 c*******l 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : true : 该停就要停,该动就要启动快
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a***e 发帖数: 2094 | 20 oh, never know dancesport.uk has such discussions. interesting...
【在 l**********d 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : agree, for 3, i think it is about something like delayed walks may help. : http://www.dancesport.uk.com/tid-bits/issue079.htm
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a***e 发帖数: 2094 | 21 Thanks for dropping by the board!
1. You didn't seem to spot very well when you did your spins, which gave a
slightly unstable impression |