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发帖数: 210 | 1 4.21收到系里面的offer of admission, 谁知道5.1收到graduate school的据信。真泪
目。而且现在都5月了，这个又是dream school，真心想去。希望各位同学帮忙看一下
。期望我的厚脸皮argue可以争取一个好结果吧。
Dear xxx, (EECS Graduate Coordinator)
I am sorry to bother you again. (昨晚一收到据信就激动就回了，说如果可以
conditional admission，一定来)
I understand that my past academic performance do not fulfill the request of
admission. But I am confident to begin my master of EE program in xx
University in Fall 2012 if you can grant me the admission. The reason is
that, not only I got the offer of admission from school of Electrical
Engineering of xx University but also I had participated in research during
my undergraduate time. I had been qualified as a researcher xx, which had
been mentioned in my Personal Statement.
Additionally, the website of the office of admissions stated that, “
students who do not meet the minimum GPA requirements may be considered for
admission. The major department will determine if they wish to support these
applicants before the
Graduate Admissions Committee.” (office of admission网页上说了，应该就是
conditional admission的意思。)
I would love to join in the master program in xx University because I know
your school has very school faculties and researchers in EE, especially, in
the area of xx. So I applied to your school and hope I can learn more
knowledge and conduct interesting research. After that, I will apply for
the PhD program in your school so as to explore more interesting
technologies.
At last, I hope you can kindly enough to reconsider my application.
Thank you for your time and considerations.
Yours sincerely,
xxx | a*m
发帖数: 6253 | 2 自己先读一遍，把英文改好吧，尤其最后一段，话都没说溜，别人也看不下去。。。
你应该强调自己好的地方（学习或者研究能力强，举个例子，不要引用自己的
statement，不会去查的)，自己不好的地方(GPA差了点,你可以找个理由，比如某些非
专业课考试没考好）轻轻带过就好了吧
说白了，人家要extra effort来support你的case，你总要给人足够的理由和事实。。
。而不是跟人讲道理说规则上是可以的。。。 如果是我的话，我的语气会是要去求人
帮忙，而不是要去argue。。。 |
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