h*****o
发帖数: 240 | 1 "field sales 抱怨 telesales 抢了他们的生意"
怎么翻译? |
n******t
发帖数: 4406 | 2 grab their business away..
【在 h*****o 的大作中提到】
: "field sales 抱怨 telesales 抢了他们的生意"
: 怎么翻译?
|
o********l
发帖数: 12430 | 3 Now now now, let's all just calm down and talk this through...
You have to realize that it's not "your" sale or the telemarketer's sale, it
's all part of the company's sale. You have to think of it this way, we're
a part of the same team, we all work for the same company. So just eat it
and let it go.
【在 h*****o 的大作中提到】
: "field sales 抱怨 telesales 抢了他们的生意"
: 怎么翻译?
|
h*****o
发帖数: 240 | 4 But they are not exactly part of the same team, but indeed they work for the
same company.
I am just writing a risk management plan to reconcile conflicts between
sales teams and to eliminate the occurrence on two sales teams harm
each other's transactions beforehand.
谢谢oregongirl, 另外帮我看看我上面这两句话写得哪里有不通顺的地方?
thank you |
h*****o
发帖数: 240 | 5
en....sounds native.
can i say grab their clients/contract away?
thank you
【在 n******t 的大作中提到】
: grab their business away..
|
l*r
发帖数: 669 | 6 too many buts ...
the
【在 h*****o 的大作中提到】
: But they are not exactly part of the same team, but indeed they work for the
: same company.
: I am just writing a risk management plan to reconcile conflicts between
: sales teams and to eliminate the occurrence on two sales teams harm
: each other's transactions beforehand.
: 谢谢oregongirl, 另外帮我看看我上面这两句话写得哪里有不通顺的地方?
: thank you
|
l*r
发帖数: 669 | 7 sounds foreign ...
【在 h*****o 的大作中提到】
:
: en....sounds native.
: can i say grab their clients/contract away?
: thank you
|
o********l
发帖数: 12430 | 8 how many is too many?
but it's just butts
【在 l*r 的大作中提到】
: too many buts ...
:
: the
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h*****o
发帖数: 240 | 9 all right... just tease me ....
so sad.....
^_^
but you guys are right, i should omit the first but la.. :)
any suggestion about the second paragraph
"I am just writing a risk management plan to reconcile conflicts between
sales teams and to eliminate the occurrence on two sales teams harm
each other's transactions beforehand. "
???
I just think if i want to improve my writing skill, it's better to track the
accuracy of each word on my handout.
any suggestion, my friends ? |
o********l
发帖数: 12430 | 10 #1. you probably can't reconcile something that hasn't happened.
#2. don't use the "just"
are you trying to write a plan on how to avoid (future) conflicts between
sales teams?
the
【在 h*****o 的大作中提到】
: But they are not exactly part of the same team, but indeed they work for the
: same company.
: I am just writing a risk management plan to reconcile conflicts between
: sales teams and to eliminate the occurrence on two sales teams harm
: each other's transactions beforehand.
: 谢谢oregongirl, 另外帮我看看我上面这两句话写得哪里有不通顺的地方?
: thank you
|
h*****o
发帖数: 240 | 11
Thanks for the reply
1. so "reconcile" is only appropriate to something already happened?
then how to reconcile some problem that is unpredictable?
2. i will omit the just, thank you.
3. yes, I have working on a project management plan for the past 2 days.
I have just finished 2 pages out of 10 which is required. One of the risk management plan is to let two(telesales and filed sales) sales processes get along with each other.
So far i learn how poor my writing skill really is.....almost below
【在 o********l 的大作中提到】
: #1. you probably can't reconcile something that hasn't happened.
: #2. don't use the "just"
: are you trying to write a plan on how to avoid (future) conflicts between
: sales teams?
:
: the
|
o********l
发帖数: 12430 | 12
to avoid future problems
you're welcome
i have been working on .....
management plan is to let two(telesales and filed sales) sales processes get
along with each other.
there you go with the "just" again...omit omit omit...
telemarketers can set appointments and field sales go out and close the deal
. if it's easy to close over the phone then give the tele guys all the
credit. field sales are to establish and maintain relationships. this is a
classic inside and outside sales situation. they
【在 h*****o 的大作中提到】
:
: Thanks for the reply
: 1. so "reconcile" is only appropriate to something already happened?
: then how to reconcile some problem that is unpredictable?
: 2. i will omit the just, thank you.
: 3. yes, I have working on a project management plan for the past 2 days.
: I have just finished 2 pages out of 10 which is required. One of the risk management plan is to let two(telesales and filed sales) sales processes get along with each other.
: So far i learn how poor my writing skill really is.....almost below
|
h*****o
发帖数: 240 | 13 telemarketers can set appointments and field sales go out and close the deal
. if it's easy to close over the phone then give the tele guys all the
credit. field sales are to establish and maintain relationships. this is a
classic inside and outside sales situation. they should compliment each
other and not compete with each other. |
