s****s 发帖数: 368 | 1 【 以下文字转载自 EnglishChat 讨论区 】
发信人: stones (一儿一女活神仙), 信区: EnglishChat
标 题: Q: 我相信他的加盟会提高我们的科研能力
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Sun May 6 20:44:03 2012, 美东)
Is this ok?
I expect his joining our program will greatly improve our research capacity. | s******y 发帖数: 28562 | 2 不要用improve,这个的潜台词是说以前情况很糟糕,
最好用enhance, enlarge, strengthen
capacity.
【在 s****s 的大作中提到】 : 【 以下文字转载自 EnglishChat 讨论区 】 : 发信人: stones (一儿一女活神仙), 信区: EnglishChat : 标 题: Q: 我相信他的加盟会提高我们的科研能力 : 发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Sun May 6 20:44:03 2012, 美东) : Is this ok? : I expect his joining our program will greatly improve our research capacity.
| s****s 发帖数: 368 | 3 Thanks!
"his joining our program"
Is this correct? | s******y 发帖数: 28562 | 4 这个倒是没有问题的。
【在 s****s 的大作中提到】 : Thanks! : "his joining our program" : Is this correct?
| l******a 发帖数: 278 | 5 Two cents, what about this?
"With his join, I expect that our program will be greatly enhanced and
strengthened."
Everybody knows he comes to help on research. Also, "capacity" is not quite
proper. | s****s 发帖数: 368 | | j***o 发帖数: 5096 | 7 Hi, Two-cents, I think this is more proper:
"With his joint, I expect that our program will be greatly enlarged and
strengthened."
我本周鹤下周去别的版玩,谢谢
quite
【在 l******a 的大作中提到】 : Two cents, what about this? : "With his join, I expect that our program will be greatly enhanced and : strengthened." : Everybody knows he comes to help on research. Also, "capacity" is not quite : proper.
| p**t 发帖数: 820 | 8 maybe, "with his presence,"
【在 j***o 的大作中提到】 : Hi, Two-cents, I think this is more proper: : "With his joint, I expect that our program will be greatly enlarged and : strengthened." : 我本周鹤下周去别的版玩,谢谢 : : quite
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