s*******o
发帖数: 163 | 1 Dear Dr. xxx
It has been a while since I was interviewed at your department. I hope all
is well.
I would like to let you know that I just received an informal offer from
another university. But I am more drawn to the research environment at your
department. I resonate with your blueprint of the development of the
department, i.e., to build a XXX-related XXX program, and am excited to
utilize my connections with academia and industry to help achieve the goal.
I believe that I am a better fit for this position. So, if possible, please
let me know your decision at your earliest convenience.
Thank you very much.
我就想突出我想去这个学校的心情，但是又不能显得太desperate。这么些行么。谢谢
大家！！ | A******y
发帖数: 2041 | 2 If you are going to tell them that you have an offer, tell them where it
came from. An informal offer equals no offer in my mind. | P*****t
发帖数: 4978 | 3 better fit than whom?
your
.
please
【在 s*******o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Dr. xxx
: It has been a while since I was interviewed at your department. I hope all
: is well.
: I would like to let you know that I just received an informal offer from
: another university. But I am more drawn to the research environment at your
: department. I resonate with your blueprint of the development of the
: department, i.e., to build a XXX-related XXX program, and am excited to
: utilize my connections with academia and industry to help achieve the goal.
: I believe that I am a better fit for this position. So, if possible, please
: let me know your decision at your earliest convenience.
| R********A
发帖数: 1759 | 4 估计LZ想说这个学校better fit他自己。说实话，没什么好问的，面完就move on,是第
一人选自然联系你，不是的话，只能等人家据了才轮到你。
【在 P*****t 的大作中提到】
: better fit than whom?
:
: your
: .
: please
| A*******x
发帖数: 368 | 5 有offer自然要用。人有时候就是这样，别人哄抢的东西才觉的是品质信的过的，否则
就不会有ebay, amazon, taobao的星评系统了。
建议楼主发过去，但是语气不用这么生硬正式，“I would like to let you know
that I just received an informal offer from another university” 感觉有点威
胁的口气。 | e**********m
发帖数: 397 | 6 有点儿用劲儿过猛。。。后面写太多，太eager 了，放轻松，就说他们仍然是你的top
interest就好了 | n*******l
发帖数: 2911 | 7 我觉得，在面试时表忠心是必要条件，但是在系里已经面试完而且给候选人排过名次之
后，表忠心没什么用。
your
.
please
【在 s*******o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Dr. xxx
: It has been a while since I was interviewed at your department. I hope all
: is well.
: I would like to let you know that I just received an informal offer from
: another university. But I am more drawn to the research environment at your
: department. I resonate with your blueprint of the development of the
: department, i.e., to build a XXX-related XXX program, and am excited to
: utilize my connections with academia and industry to help achieve the goal.
: I believe that I am a better fit for this position. So, if possible, please
: let me know your decision at your earliest convenience.
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