G***G
发帖数: 16778 | 1 I published the story in Newyork board for new year.
if you are interested, you can go there to read them.
Of course, you can give me your feedback here. | I***i
发帖数: 14557 | | t*******y
发帖数: 10477 | 3 my feedback: move it here.
【在 G***G 的大作中提到】
: I published the story in Newyork board for new year.
: if you are interested, you can go there to read them.
: Of course, you can give me your feedback here.
| t*******y
发帖数: 10477 | 4 read 1/3 of the first part and gave up. too long, using English to tell a
Chinese story, slow paced, can' finish it.
【在 G***G 的大作中提到】
: I published the story in Newyork board for new year.
: if you are interested, you can go there to read them.
: Of course, you can give me your feedback here.
| G***G
发帖数: 16778 | 5 Yes, you are right. it is a very beautiful story in Chinese. but I made it
worse
in English. I felt my language was very barren and pale when I wrote it in
English. I couldn't express what I wanted to express as well in English as
in Chinese.
Thank you for giving you feedback. I really appreciate it. It would be
better to leave the story in Newyork board rather than here because most of
people
who will read and criticize it there don't know me.
【在 t*******y 的大作中提到】
: read 1/3 of the first part and gave up. too long, using English to tell a
: Chinese story, slow paced, can' finish it.
| m***a
发帖数: 1407 | 6 过来没？Dallas？以后常联系哈！
BTW，我很欣赏你贵在坚持呵，还喜欢用英文发表些难得的话题。 |
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