T*****E
发帖数: 1785 | 1 Contribution不好写啊，我写了16页来证明这条，总觉得有点杂乱，有些地方有重复，
下面是我的格式，大家看看怎么改得简洁些。 能不能以第一条为主干，其他7条穿插
其中好了，还是觉得乱。 大家给点建议吧。
(A) Evidence of the alien's original scientific, scholarly, artistic,
athletic, or business related contributions of major significance to the
field;
I: Contributions of the petitioner’s research to the field
1, 2, 3, 4 条， 每条一段，中间只给出发表在什么文章上
II：Evidence II: Research publications have been cited independently for
multiple times by authors around the world.
罗列了数字和地理分布
III: The petitioner’ |
l******5
发帖数: 3030 | 2 在CONTRIBUTION中罗列了CITATION的数字和地理分布， 轮到了AUTHORSHIP LZ想怎么办
？ |
T*****E
发帖数: 1785 | 3 重复一遍行不？
我是看到了有些被拒的，就因为contribution里没有足够的citation支持而被拒。 所
以心虚的列上citation.不过老大这句话倒是提醒我了，CITATION的数字和地理分布还
是放到authorhsip里算了。
【在 l******5 的大作中提到】
: 在CONTRIBUTION中罗列了CITATION的数字和地理分布， 轮到了AUTHORSHIP LZ想怎么办
: ？
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d***0
发帖数: 117 | 4 Many jounals said in thier website some thing like: journal“publishes
original research articles” or "only original and novel methods will be
considered for publication".
This is documendary evidence to demonstrate your work is original.
read my outline of response to RFE about contribution
http://www.mitbbs.com/article_t1/Immigration/31666071_0_1.html |
l******5
发帖数: 3030 | 5 CITATION不是不能放在CONTRIBUTION， 也不是不能提数字。 要将一些不是FOOTNOTES
的CITATION提出来， 重点讲上一讲， 再用数字支持一下。
【在 T*****E 的大作中提到】
: 重复一遍行不？
: 我是看到了有些被拒的，就因为contribution里没有足够的citation支持而被拒。 所
: 以心虚的列上citation.不过老大这句话倒是提醒我了，CITATION的数字和地理分布还
: 是放到authorhsip里算了。
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R******N
发帖数: 30 | 6 i, iv merged together, specific to each topic would be helpful. |
s******t
发帖数: 3572 | 7 I,to VI, 按contribution 点，一个一个说。每个contribution是什么，有什么影响，
如何significance了。
第七，八条放到自己背景介绍里去。
【在 T*****E 的大作中提到】
: Contribution不好写啊，我写了16页来证明这条，总觉得有点杂乱，有些地方有重复，
: 下面是我的格式，大家看看怎么改得简洁些。 能不能以第一条为主干，其他7条穿插
: 其中好了，还是觉得乱。 大家给点建议吧。
: (A) Evidence of the alien's original scientific, scholarly, artistic,
: athletic, or business related contributions of major significance to the
: field;
: I: Contributions of the petitioner’s research to the field
: 1, 2, 3, 4 条， 每条一段，中间只给出发表在什么文章上
: II：Evidence II: Research publications have been cited independently for
: multiple times by authors around the world.
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A*********r
发帖数: 8271 | 8 The way you argue is not to list the evidence there. You need to use your
evidence to support your argument.
(A) Evidence of the alien's original scientific, scholarly, artistic,
athletic, or business related contributions of major significance to the
field;
1 Introduction of the research1, 2, 3, 4, use (including the expert testimony here.)
2 My original contribution was published by scientific journal.
3 My work was heavily cited by world renowned scientist and the impact of my original imp
【在 T*****E 的大作中提到】
: Contribution不好写啊，我写了16页来证明这条，总觉得有点杂乱，有些地方有重复，
: 下面是我的格式，大家看看怎么改得简洁些。 能不能以第一条为主干，其他7条穿插
: 其中好了，还是觉得乱。 大家给点建议吧。
: (A) Evidence of the alien's original scientific, scholarly, artistic,
: athletic, or business related contributions of major significance to the
: field;
: I: Contributions of the petitioner’s research to the field
: 1, 2, 3, 4 条， 每条一段，中间只给出发表在什么文章上
: II：Evidence II: Research publications have been cited independently for
: multiple times by authors around the world.
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A*********r
发帖数: 8271 | 9 When you write for contribution, always keep in mind you want to prove "
original" research and "major significance" in the field. Organize your
thoughts around these two. |
C*******e
发帖数: 855 | 10 我大概属于侥幸过关的。回头看看我自己拽的petition letter，我倒是Claim了四条，
可我展开来的时候的确没一条一条的论述，我只说了Significant Contribution,
education background和outstanding working experience，其实他们是相互重复的，
不同的侧重，反复论述我做的那点工作。我的petition letter全长不到14页。 |
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T*****E
发帖数: 1785 | 11 Thank you so much!
I guess you will get card pretty soon. You are really good at this stuff now
.
testimony here.)
my original impact on the other people's research can be shown from selected
citation from people who cited my paper.(Citation maps etc see Exhibit.) (
Quotations from others can be served as independent expert evidence. )
the coverage of the major media and scientific reports. Enumerate the
major media coverage. (Details report see exhibit)
【在 A*********r 的大作中提到】
: The way you argue is not to list the evidence there. You need to use your
: evidence to support your argument.
: (A) Evidence of the alien's original scientific, scholarly, artistic,
: athletic, or business related contributions of major significance to the
: field;
: 1 Introduction of the research1, 2, 3, 4, use (including the expert testimony here.)
: 2 My original contribution was published by scientific journal.
: 3 My work was heavily cited by world renowned scientist and the impact of my original imp
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A*********r
发帖数: 8271 | 12 谢你吉言。I am in a desperate need of the green card.
Unfortunately, whether I am good at this stuff has no bearing on the
strength of my case. Whether the petition can be approved is still up in the air. And so is my plan for the instant future. :(
now
selected
【在 T*****E 的大作中提到】
: Thank you so much!
: I guess you will get card pretty soon. You are really good at this stuff now
: .
:
: testimony here.)
: my original impact on the other people's research can be shown from selected
: citation from people who cited my paper.(Citation maps etc see Exhibit.) (
: Quotations from others can be served as independent expert evidence. )
: the coverage of the major media and scientific reports. Enumerate the
: major media coverage. (Details report see exhibit)
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T*****E
发帖数: 1785 | 13 Green card is not that important, but iritating though.
Do what ever you want, it will come anyway.
the air. And so is my plan for the instant future. :(
【在 A*********r 的大作中提到】
: 谢你吉言。I am in a desperate need of the green card.
: Unfortunately, whether I am good at this stuff has no bearing on the
: strength of my case. Whether the petition can be approved is still up in the air. And so is my plan for the instant future. :(
:
: now
: selected
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A*********r
发帖数: 8271 | 14 It is actually very important in my case. (I learned it the hard way, maybe
I should say a heart-wrenching way. ) Anyway, it is not the end of world if
I don't get it by the end of this summer. I will just suck it up and
postpone things I want to do.
【在 T*****E 的大作中提到】
: Green card is not that important, but iritating though.
: Do what ever you want, it will come anyway.
:
: the air. And so is my plan for the instant future. :(
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l******n
发帖数: 520 | 15 听朋友说IO比较讨厌重复和复杂，因为重复所以占篇幅，占篇幅就占IO的时间。
我感觉这个和我们写科研论文一样，要简单明了 |
