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o*********e
发帖数: 309 | 1 请大侠们帮着看一看，推荐信里有下面的字眼，是不是不好啊。
所有的推荐信都准备好了，律师突然说下面的话有些concern，郁闷死了，当时他们都
看过了，现在又说看推荐信不是他们的责任！！ 郁闷死了，当时也没有明确写明律师
的责任，吃大亏了！！！！
your achievement is “stunning for a scientist of Dr. XX’s age.”
you have “intelligence and courage rarely seen among scientists of his age
.”
He also says that you are one of the 5 top “graduate students” he has
encountered.
you are “already well on track to establish a stellar career as a top
independent scientist in xx research.”
you have “potential to further lead in the cancer research arena.” | o*********e
发帖数: 309 | 2 忘了说了，是申请EB1B，phd毕业一年。
age
【在 o*********e 的大作中提到】
: 请大侠们帮着看一看，推荐信里有下面的字眼，是不是不好啊。
: 所有的推荐信都准备好了，律师突然说下面的话有些concern，郁闷死了，当时他们都
: 看过了，现在又说看推荐信不是他们的责任！！ 郁闷死了，当时也没有明确写明律师
: 的责任，吃大亏了！！！！
: your achievement is “stunning for a scientist of Dr. XX’s age.”
: you have “intelligence and courage rarely seen among scientists of his age
: .”
: He also says that you are one of the 5 top “graduate students” he has
: encountered.
: you are “already well on track to establish a stellar career as a top
| o*********e
发帖数: 309 | | m***c
发帖数: 637 | 4 for eb1b, these words are not good, it will hurt you. this letter is for NIW
your achievement is “stunning for a scientist of Dr. XX’s age(no age).”
you have “intelligence and courage rarely seen among scientists of his age(
no age)
.”
He also says that you are one of the 5 top “graduate (no graduate students)
students” he has
encountered.
you are “already well on track to establish a stellar career as a top
independent scientist in xx research.” (this is OK, but soso)
you have “potential (no potential) to further lead in the cancer research
arena.”
always use top, leading, internationally recognized, small of percentage, in
your field, in the world, in some specific area |
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