d********g
发帖数: 18 | 1 5月毕业，6月陪家人到处玩了一下以及准备搬家，7月搬到加州正式找工作，现在已经
快2个月了还是没有着落，心里那个急呀～现在准备第三次从大结构／方向／strategy
上改cover letter。我也不打算遮遮掩掩了，直接贴出来求拍砖／意见／建议
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope that this email finds you well. I'm writing to you to state my
interest in the position of Graphic Designer at XXX. I'm a fresh grad who
look forward to pursue a bigger dream as a designer. I believe that XXX is
the best place to realize my knowledges and ideas, as well as to achieve my
goal as an all-rounded designer. That is to say: I bring in rich knowledges/
in-sighs of digital/interactive design, in exchange to actual experience of
book, identity and poster design.
Please allow me to highlight my qualifications here and make it easier to
know more about me:
MFA degree in Graphic Design.
Professionally trained conceptual thinking and developing.
Exceptional typography, color usage and composition skills.
7 years experience as a Web/UI Designer at digital technology companies.
Solid understanding of website functionality, interaction, user interface
and navigation.
Mastery level knowledge of Photoshop, Illustrator and InDesign.
Working knowledge of HTML + CSS coding.
A self-starter.
Excellent time management and stress management skills, able to work
intelligently and be more efficient.
Efficient communication skills.
I really look forward to the opportunity to work at XXX. Thank you very much
for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
bla bla bla
我读master以前是一直在企业内部做网页／UI的，现在除了在找跟原来经验match的职
位的同时又想考虑一下小转行到design agency／设计公司试一下，所以我的dilemma是
，一方面有多年工作经验，一方面在想转的行业前又是小白一个，这样的简历／cover
letter该如何写才好？ |
p*******h
发帖数: 147 | 2 太长了，没人会看得。。。你这个是networking 的cover letter 还是 发简历用的，
你先去网上research 下吧，你在这里问，9成会告诉你现在没人看cover letter |
t********5
发帖数: 522 | 3 列一个project的单子 能挂在线上的尽量挂在线上 给上连接
projects还不错的情况下 秒杀所有recruiter |
b**********5
发帖数: 7881 | 4 我帮你改一改吧：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very interested in the Graphic Designer position at XXX. I have a
proven track record in almost all of the competencies you're seeking. Here
are a few highlights:
MFA degree in Graphic Design.
Professionally trained conceptual thinking and developing.
Exceptional typography, color usage and composition skills.
7 years experience as a Web/UI Designer at digital technology companies.
Solid understanding of website functionality, interaction, user interface
and navigation.
Mastery level knowledge of Photoshop, Illustrator and InDesign.
Working knowledge of HTML + CSS coding.
A self-starter, able to work under pressure.
Excellent communication skills.
I believe that XXX is a perfect place to realize my knowledge and ideas by
working alongside other exceptional and creative designers at XXX. I really
look forward to the opportunity to work at XXX. Thank you very much for
your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
bla bla bla
你有经验， 就别说什么fresh grad. 然后别说什么i bring 什么， in exchange什么
， 那句话读的时候， 怪怪的 |
F********y
发帖数: 400 | 5 哎原来这样的cover也算太多字吗。。。我都快300了字难道我必须要砍一半？
可是我谈过的几个career center或者recruiter都说我的长度很OK啊？ |
b**********5
发帖数: 7881 | 6 我觉得这就要你什么专业了吧。 我觉得搞IT， 没人看cover letter。。。。
【在 F********y 的大作中提到】
: 哎原来这样的cover也算太多字吗。。。我都快300了字难道我必须要砍一半？
: 可是我谈过的几个career center或者recruiter都说我的长度很OK啊？
|
d*******y
发帖数: 27 | 7 cover letter中也是按照罗列的方式写？ |
D*********Y
发帖数: 3382 | 8 目前为止得到interview都是没cover letter的。写的cover letter声泪俱下，热情洋
溢的，都木有用。 |
d*******y
发帖数: 27 | 9
很多recruiter不会看cover letter吗？
【在 b**********5 的大作中提到】
: 我觉得这就要你什么专业了吧。 我觉得搞IT， 没人看cover letter。。。。
|
F********y
发帖数: 400 | 10 我是土木的，基本申请区都有填cover letter的地方。。。虽然我到最后也不知道我的
cover对于我找到工作有多少帮助，因为得到interview都是当地craigslist为主，网投
大公司的几乎没回音。。。
【在 D*********Y 的大作中提到】
: 目前为止得到interview都是没cover letter的。写的cover letter声泪俱下，热情洋
: 溢的，都木有用。
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b**********5
发帖数: 7881 | 11 没有规定的格式
【在 d*******y 的大作中提到】
: cover letter中也是按照罗列的方式写？
|
u*****o
发帖数: 1224 | 12 Professionally trained conceptual thinking and developing.
这句语法不通吧。。。conceptual thinking 后加developing 干啥。。 |
d********g
发帖数: 18 | 13 我也是很纠结，不知道到底有没有人看。可是每次网投都有放cover letter的地方，为
了安全起见，就都还是放了。
【在 b**********5 的大作中提到】
: 我觉得这就要你什么专业了吧。 我觉得搞IT， 没人看cover letter。。。。
|
d********g
发帖数: 18 | 14 大牛，谢谢！
【在 b**********5 的大作中提到】
: 我帮你改一改吧：
: Dear Sir/Madam,
: I am very interested in the Graphic Designer position at XXX. I have a
: proven track record in almost all of the competencies you're seeking. Here
: are a few highlights:
: MFA degree in Graphic Design.
: Professionally trained conceptual thinking and developing.
: Exceptional typography, color usage and composition skills.
: 7 years experience as a Web/UI Designer at digital technology companies.
: Solid understanding of website functionality, interaction, user interface
|
d********g
发帖数: 18 | 15 发简历用的，就是有些职位是可以直接发email申请的，算是email里的内容吧。
【在 p*******h 的大作中提到】
: 太长了，没人会看得。。。你这个是networking 的cover letter 还是 发简历用的，
: 你先去网上research 下吧，你在这里问，9成会告诉你现在没人看cover letter
|
d********g
发帖数: 18 | 16 就是concept thinking and concept developing，我改一下，谢谢！
【在 u*****o 的大作中提到】
: Professionally trained conceptual thinking and developing.
: 这句语法不通吧。。。conceptual thinking 后加developing 干啥。。
|
d********g
发帖数: 18 | 17 请问这个也是bullet point那样列吗？
【在 t********5 的大作中提到】
: 列一个project的单子 能挂在线上的尽量挂在线上 给上连接
: projects还不错的情况下 秒杀所有recruiter
|
s**********o
发帖数: 14359 | 18 Graphic Design是个竞争相当激烈的行业，COVER LETTER没啥用，
搞个自己的作品集还差不多，网上的，和自己FOLDER里的都要有，
COVER LETTER只对文科生有帮助，让我连看都不看，看了一眼很
中文话，给我假大空的印象 |
d********g
发帖数: 18 | 19 厄～作品集是有的，语言是硬伤啊～
【在 s**********o 的大作中提到】
: Graphic Design是个竞争相当激烈的行业，COVER LETTER没啥用，
: 搞个自己的作品集还差不多，网上的，和自己FOLDER里的都要有，
: COVER LETTER只对文科生有帮助，让我连看都不看，看了一眼很
: 中文话，给我假大空的印象
|
y****i
发帖数: 12114 | 20 I'm a fresh grad who look forward to pursue a bigger dream as a designer.
请楼主自己再看看这句话有多少语法错误，然后想想这样的信能产生什么效果。 |
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d********g
发帖数: 18 | 21 /_ 好～知道了，谢谢～
【在 y****i 的大作中提到】
: I'm a fresh grad who look forward to pursue a bigger dream as a designer.
: 请楼主自己再看看这句话有多少语法错误，然后想想这样的信能产生什么效果。
|
v*****k
发帖数: 7798 | 22 废话太多。语法错误太多。简历有的不要写
【在 d********g 的大作中提到】
: 5月毕业，6月陪家人到处玩了一下以及准备搬家，7月搬到加州正式找工作，现在已经
: 快2个月了还是没有着落，心里那个急呀～现在准备第三次从大结构／方向／strategy
: 上改cover letter。我也不打算遮遮掩掩了，直接贴出来求拍砖／意见／建议
: Dear Sir/Madam,
: I hope that this email finds you well. I'm writing to you to state my
: interest in the position of Graphic Designer at XXX. I'm a fresh grad who
: look forward to pursue a bigger dream as a designer. I believe that XXX is
: the best place to realize my knowledges and ideas, as well as to achieve my
: goal as an all-rounded designer. That is to say: I bring in rich knowledges/
: in-sighs of digital/interactive design, in exchange to actual experience of
|
r*******y
发帖数: 136 | 23 你这Cover Letter有点惊到我的小伙伴了。Cover Letter主要是让人家看看你的
Written怎么样，你罗列一堆你的Highlights不是重复你的Resume吗？里面的Syntax实
在有点。。。
strategy
my
knowledges/
of
【在 d********g 的大作中提到】
: 5月毕业，6月陪家人到处玩了一下以及准备搬家，7月搬到加州正式找工作，现在已经
: 快2个月了还是没有着落，心里那个急呀～现在准备第三次从大结构／方向／strategy
: 上改cover letter。我也不打算遮遮掩掩了，直接贴出来求拍砖／意见／建议
: Dear Sir/Madam,
: I hope that this email finds you well. I'm writing to you to state my
: interest in the position of Graphic Designer at XXX. I'm a fresh grad who
: look forward to pursue a bigger dream as a designer. I believe that XXX is
: the best place to realize my knowledges and ideas, as well as to achieve my
: goal as an all-rounded designer. That is to say: I bring in rich knowledges/
: in-sighs of digital/interactive design, in exchange to actual experience of
|
p*******h
发帖数: 147 | 24 贴个某印度同学的cover letter，基本就是这个模板，points 需要和简历不一样，是
加细节的地方。当然这个是商科，但基本也就这样吧，准备个模板，按公司改。
Hiring Manager Name
[Company]
May 1, 2012
Re: [Position]
Dear Sir/Madam:
My name is _ and I will be graduating with [degree] in [Major] this
May from [School]. My sourcing & procurement background consists of working
for Fortune 100 companies such as Oracle Corporation, The Walt Disney
Company and Chevron Corporation. My skillset includes computing spend
analysis, creating RFP, generating bids comparison, negotiating with vendors
and managing stakeholder interests. I believe that my skillset can add
value to [recruiting company/position] and thus I’m requesting your
consideration for my candidacy.
While my resume details my 4+ years of work experience, I would also like to
bring to your notice some of my strategic sourcing and supply chain
expertise below:
• Strategic Sourcing and Procurement Expertise: Executed various
technology and consulting related strategic sourcing projects for multiple
Fortune 100 companies.
• RFI/RFP and Supplier Negotiations Experience: Analyzed multiple
bids in response to diverse RFP/RFI for The Walt Disney Company and Arizona
State University Purchasing.
• Engineering and Consulting Background: Handled multiple strategic
projects with clients such as Citibank and State Street while working as a
consultant with Oracle Corporation.
• Strong Analytical Skills: Analyzed vast amounts of data using MS
Excel and possess an ability to compile historical data from various sources
in ambiguous environments.
• Technology and Software Proficiency: IT engineer with proficiency
in SAP, Visio, Excel, Ariba, Access, PeopleSoft, Oracle and Metrics.
• Excellent Communication & Presentation Skills: Regularly prepared
and presented to senior management. President of ------.
I am an energetic self-starter and a results oriented individual. I would
greatly appreciate an opportunity to discuss how I can add value to your
organization.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely, |
