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发帖数: 35 | 1 看评论里面好多美国人的comments实在可气，虽然觉得自己评论一下没什么用，像很多
人说的，这个通过不通过，估计跟下面的评论关系也不大，但是还是想发一篇，打打这
些反移民的脸。但是看版上有人说，支持方都是些留学生，语法错一堆，评了还不如不
评。我英语实在是烂，自己写了comments不敢发，贴在这里求英语水平高的给修改一下
，没什么语法错误了再发。希望看在帮助同胞的份上勿喷我的英语，谢谢帮助。
After seeing so many US citizens’ comments, I just want to laugh. Do you
really think kick all foreign talents out can help you to find a job? Wake
up! Here is the truth, without those foreign STEM students, it’s harder for
you to find a job.
Do you know employers need to face more trouble to hire foreign graduates
than hire a US citizens? They need to do more paper work, the people they
hired may not get job visa in the future, which means they cannot work
anymore. Business owners are not idiot, guess why they prefer to hire those
foreign graduates? Yes, you are not idiot neither, because they cannot find
better US citizens who are qualified to those jobs. Now you claim that, if
only US citizens left, employers have to hire them. This time you are wrong.
Business owners never put their money under high risk, if they cannot find
perfect person to do the job, they will stop making investment. They
definitely don’t want to earn more contracts, and then let their employee
screw them up. They will keep their money in their pocket, or make
investment
oversea because they can only find high quality talents over there. Thus,
foreign talents actually boost the economy, and with better investment
environment, US citizens are easier to find jobs.
The people who gave negative comments here have a same theory, I cannot find
job, because there are a lot of foreigners, who is better than me, are also
on job market. If they all gone, I will be the best, and I should be able
to find a job easily. Is it good for a country to lose a huge number of well
educated, smart, and creative talents? Everybody knows what that means to a
country. Shame on you, you put your motherland under risk only because you
want to find a job without making extra effort to improve yourself. Why don
’t you learn something, try hard work? I don’t believe if you as good as
any working foreigner, you cannot find a job! | F******M
发帖数: 98 | 2 你从business owner 以及全球化的角度的论据很不错。可以写的精炼和理性一些。 | E*******1
发帖数: 3464 | 3 我觉得观点很好，但是建议不要有主观评论，比如嘲笑别人的话这样显得不专业。语言
也可以精炼。
for
【在 c********n 的大作中提到】
: 看评论里面好多美国人的comments实在可气，虽然觉得自己评论一下没什么用，像很多
: 人说的，这个通过不通过，估计跟下面的评论关系也不大，但是还是想发一篇，打打这
: 些反移民的脸。但是看版上有人说，支持方都是些留学生，语法错一堆，评了还不如不
: 评。我英语实在是烂，自己写了comments不敢发，贴在这里求英语水平高的给修改一下
: ，没什么语法错误了再发。希望看在帮助同胞的份上勿喷我的英语，谢谢帮助。
: After seeing so many US citizens’ comments, I just want to laugh. Do you
: really think kick all foreign talents out can help you to find a job? Wake
: up! Here is the truth, without those foreign STEM students, it’s harder for
: you to find a job.
: Do you know employers need to face more trouble to hire foreign graduates
| a*********0
发帖数: 268 | 4 我觉得写的很好。已经有很多专业的了。这样子说也很解气。君不见很多美国的人评论
也是大放厥词吗。 | a*********0
发帖数: 268 | 5 我觉得写的很好。已经有很多专业的了。这样子说也很解气。君不见很多美国的人评论
也是大放厥词吗。 | a*********0
发帖数: 268 | 6 我觉得写的很好。已经有很多专业的了。这样子说也很解气。君不见很多美国的人评论
也是大放厥词吗。 | d*******2
发帖数: 3045 | 7 http://www.stopoverreach.com
stop STEM extension，凭什么这些人就有特权呢，我们拿了绿卡入了籍的人找工作都
有苦难，工作压力很多，很大一部分原因就是这些因为身份而特别卖命的人 | E*******1
发帖数: 3464 | 8 我把你的观点改编了一下，缩短了很多，comment了
I support OPT extension rule. The negative comments here have a common
misunderstanding: I cannot find a job because there are a lot of foreigners.
Well, this already implies that STEM foreigners are so important to US
because they are way better.
In fact STEM graduates contribute to strengthen America’s technology, to
boost America’s economy and to create more job opportunities for Americans.
Without their contribution, the job markets will shrink severely in America
. In the long run, American's leading role in economy and technology will
disappear, and even less job opportunities as a result then. Some people
here, however, hope America to sacrifice heavily to lose a huge number of
well-educated and creative talents. Come on, why don’t you try work harder?
Business owners are not fool, they will not hire people who are not eager
to improve themselves but only conspire against others.
for
【在 c********n 的大作中提到】
: 看评论里面好多美国人的comments实在可气，虽然觉得自己评论一下没什么用，像很多
: 人说的，这个通过不通过，估计跟下面的评论关系也不大，但是还是想发一篇，打打这
: 些反移民的脸。但是看版上有人说，支持方都是些留学生，语法错一堆，评了还不如不
: 评。我英语实在是烂，自己写了comments不敢发，贴在这里求英语水平高的给修改一下
: ，没什么语法错误了再发。希望看在帮助同胞的份上勿喷我的英语，谢谢帮助。
: After seeing so many US citizens’ comments, I just want to laugh. Do you
: really think kick all foreign talents out can help you to find a job? Wake
: up! Here is the truth, without those foreign STEM students, it’s harder for
: you to find a job.
: Do you know employers need to face more trouble to hire foreign graduates
| m******c
发帖数: 2440 | 9 挺好的，不要反问就好了，心平气和。
好多老美也是乱写，还有人举迪士尼的例子，可以利用这个来说明更应该支持OPT
extension | M*****l
发帖数: 4478 | 10 把employers换成We，雇主视角第一人称写。 | w***t
发帖数: 1474 | 11 有一些单复数需要再检查一下。比如Business owners are not idiot(s)
you are not (an) idiot neither，they will stop making investment(s)
...because they cannot find better(换成enough) US citizens who are qualified
to(for) those jobs. 很多句子虽然读起来比较中式英语，但是也无所谓。你的立场
本来就是外国人，就算毫无语法错误美国人也心知肚明。观点表达出来就行了。
我们要强调就是这么几个观点：
1. opt学生做得绝大都是high tech，雇佣成本很高。employer之所以愿意花这么大代
价招国际学生是因为找不到足够的qualified的美国人能干或者愿意干这些活，而不是
为了省钱。
2. 如果有一个美国人有类似的学历和技能也愿意去这些high tech公司，那他不可能找
不到工作。由于雇佣成本比国际学生低，找到工作的难度要低得多。
3. 这些美国公司靠国际学生的辛苦工作创造了巨大的利益，制造了更多的job。
4. 赶走国际学生只会让high tech公司往海外投资扩张，而不可能去招unqualified的
美国公民。
5. 最后总结，想找到high tech工作，就老老实实去读个学位，而不是在网上骂街
for
【在 c********n 的大作中提到】
: 看评论里面好多美国人的comments实在可气，虽然觉得自己评论一下没什么用，像很多
: 人说的，这个通过不通过，估计跟下面的评论关系也不大，但是还是想发一篇，打打这
: 些反移民的脸。但是看版上有人说，支持方都是些留学生，语法错一堆，评了还不如不
: 评。我英语实在是烂，自己写了comments不敢发，贴在这里求英语水平高的给修改一下
: ，没什么语法错误了再发。希望看在帮助同胞的份上勿喷我的英语，谢谢帮助。
: After seeing so many US citizens’ comments, I just want to laugh. Do you
: really think kick all foreign talents out can help you to find a job? Wake
: up! Here is the truth, without those foreign STEM students, it’s harder for
: you to find a job.
: Do you know employers need to face more trouble to hire foreign graduates
| c****x
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