n******8 发帖数: 558 | 1 Sail
I made a one-man yacht,
When I was innocently young.
I inscribed my dream into its decorative art,
And installed my iron will so it would last long.
I set sail on a day fair and clear,
Crossing the winding river called Mortality.
I didn’t pay the river a penny of fear,
Sailing towards the invisible bank called Eternity.
I encountered a thick fog of desire,
And immersed in its seductive humidity.
Then I encountered a blinding fog of greed,
And inflicted by its insidious morbidity.
Then my heart chastised my eyes in a barrage,
Can’t you see anything true other than a mirage?
尝试写点沉重一点的, 可能词不达意 | c****2 发帖数: 345 | 2 记得 New Orleans 的教堂。这里的天主教影响现在怎样?假如人能长生不老,到250岁
时还好玩吗? | n******8 发帖数: 558 | 3 jackson square 的那个教堂? nola 的天主教挺大影响。 现在不清楚, 离开苦艾年
了。
【在 c****2 的大作中提到】 : 记得 New Orleans 的教堂。这里的天主教影响现在怎样?假如人能长生不老,到250岁 : 时还好玩吗?
| wh 发帖数: 141625 | 4 除了barrack那句有点拗,其他都很有意思。让我想起Arnold Böcklin画的Island
of the Dead,你的比他更亮色一点哦:
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】 : Sail : I made a one-man yacht, : When I was innocently young. : I inscribed my dream into its decorative art, : And installed my iron will so it would last long. : I set sail on a day fair and clear, : Crossing the winding river called Mortality. : I didn’t pay the river a penny of fear, : Sailing towards the invisible bank called Eternity. : I encountered a thick fog of desire,
| n******8 发帖数: 558 | 5 谢谢 wh 点评 想写的光明点, 那幅画很有意思。
Island
【在 wh 的大作中提到】 : 除了barrack那句有点拗,其他都很有意思。让我想起Arnold Böcklin画的Island : of the Dead,你的比他更亮色一点哦:
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