n******8
发帖数: 558 | 1 Snowflakes
You raised me into the sky on a snowy night,
so I collected the glittering snowflakes with a thermal jar.
I carried the thermal jar light and bright,
and wished the snowflakes could travel with us far.
Our night long journey ends with dewy light,
on a sunny morning we were fated to part.
You sing farewell to the glittering tears in my eyes,
they are the snowflakes melt by my broken heart. | e***d
发帖数: 8248 | 2 此地无银，哈哈哈。
好奇: 楼主在写这类意象指向不是特别鲜明的文字时，会写注释备忘么？
否则二十多年后，会不会自己都想不起来初始构思了？
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Snowflakes
: You raised me into the sky on a snowy night,
: so I collected the glittering snowflakes with a thermal jar.
: I carried the thermal jar light and bright,
: and wished the snowflakes could travel with us far.
: Our night long journey ends with dewy light,
: on a sunny morning we were fated to part.
: You sing farewell to the glittering tears in my eyes,
: they are the snowflakes melt by my broken heart.
| n******8
发帖数: 558 | 3 哈哈哈 觉得 leave it open 好些 读者可以各取所需 再贴一首很含糊的。
【在 e***d 的大作中提到】
: 此地无银，哈哈哈。
: 好奇: 楼主在写这类意象指向不是特别鲜明的文字时，会写注释备忘么？
: 否则二十多年后，会不会自己都想不起来初始构思了？
| e***d
发帖数: 8248 | 4 好奇这首用汉语怎么写？
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: 哈哈哈 觉得 leave it open 好些 读者可以各取所需 再贴一首很含糊的。
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