S*******t 发帖数: 3956 | 1 2006/6/16
贝壳
顺着海水和天空旋转的方向
贝壳,转出了温暖的肉体像人类的黄昏
可以把头颅藏起的,不是泥土,而是尘埃和星星
你熟悉的事物正在回到故乡。有一扇窗,静静的,处在掌灯时分
想要告诉你,在贝壳里我睡了许久,忘记了潮汐写过的春花秋月
我梦见自己被所有人怀在金色的蛋中,那种感觉妙不可言
我的黄昏是语言和沙,不断返回的年代
今天我在海水的一个氧里和你约会
我准备了烛火和酒,相信你会从兰村赶来,带来蝴蝶
相信我们会像鱼一样接吻,然后在一首诗换行的地方做那件事
想要告诉你贝壳里有另一个海
装满了古老的星空。那些星星会在你的名字里重新诞生
就在今天,贝壳里的楼梯上漆着光芒,走到最后一级你说你再也不会离开
2006/6/30
地图上一个好听的地名下雨了
打开地图。一个好听的地名在下雨
雨是去年夏天的雨。每一颗,都发出响声
我知道有一颗雨会停在地图上
像缓慢的星,停着,直到可以居住
我知道那颗雨中两个人在相爱
寂寞的地名长出了好听的花
去年夏天,鱼从地图上游走了
那颗雨被腾空,被打扫干净,等着我们搬进去
我在雨的一角点上了烛火。风很小很小
我把钥匙挂在橘树上,远远的,你就会看见
是的一首诗中下雨了
世界上仅你一人听到。你拿着地图,来到门前。兰村下雨了 |
c**m 发帖数: 1632 | 2 Nice and sweet and cute~~ It is like,
"Follow the staircases up you will find me
In rains in village in balconies you love me~"
My personal feeling is that these two lines are the best in the second half~~
我知道那颗雨中两个人在相爱
寂寞的地名长出了好听的花
【在 S*******t 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 2006/6/16 : 贝壳 : 顺着海水和天空旋转的方向 : 贝壳,转出了温暖的肉体像人类的黄昏 : 可以把头颅藏起的,不是泥土,而是尘埃和星星 : 你熟悉的事物正在回到故乡。有一扇窗,静静的,处在掌灯时分 : 想要告诉你,在贝壳里我睡了许久,忘记了潮汐写过的春花秋月 : 我梦见自己被所有人怀在金色的蛋中,那种感觉妙不可言 : 我的黄昏是语言和沙,不断返回的年代 : 今天我在海水的一个氧里和你约会
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S*******t 发帖数: 3956 | 3 这个人你听说过吗? 他写的是梦幻,说不好该不该喜欢,好是很好的,难为他怎么想
出来的
half~~
【在 c**m 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : Nice and sweet and cute~~ It is like, : "Follow the staircases up you will find me : In rains in village in balconies you love me~" : My personal feeling is that these two lines are the best in the second half~~ : 我知道那颗雨中两个人在相爱 : 寂寞的地名长出了好听的花
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c**m 发帖数: 1632 | 4 No, never heard of. But from the style he wrote, he was influenced by those
20th century french/spanish poets. Quite a few chinese poets are influenced
by those "surrealists", then they mixed the symbol/images with Chinese
traditional images, that's why you could see
"在贝壳里我睡了许久,忘记了潮汐写过的春花秋月
我梦见自己被所有人怀在金色的蛋中,那种感觉妙不可言"
For me, it's the rich "texture" of words mixing emotion/fairy tale/folklores
/consciousness that is so interesting..... People mix them subconsciously
and that make modern poetry so beatiful~
Here you can find the locks~~ :)
【在 S*******t 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 这个人你听说过吗? 他写的是梦幻,说不好该不该喜欢,好是很好的,难为他怎么想 : 出来的 : : half~~
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c*g 发帖数: 1980 | 5 不错。
【在 S*******t 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 2006/6/16 : 贝壳 : 顺着海水和天空旋转的方向 : 贝壳,转出了温暖的肉体像人类的黄昏 : 可以把头颅藏起的,不是泥土,而是尘埃和星星 : 你熟悉的事物正在回到故乡。有一扇窗,静静的,处在掌灯时分 : 想要告诉你,在贝壳里我睡了许久,忘记了潮汐写过的春花秋月 : 我梦见自己被所有人怀在金色的蛋中,那种感觉妙不可言 : 我的黄昏是语言和沙,不断返回的年代 : 今天我在海水的一个氧里和你约会
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c*g 发帖数: 1980 | 6 扯淡。
those
influenced
folklores
【在 c**m 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : No, never heard of. But from the style he wrote, he was influenced by those : 20th century french/spanish poets. Quite a few chinese poets are influenced : by those "surrealists", then they mixed the symbol/images with Chinese : traditional images, that's why you could see : "在贝壳里我睡了许久,忘记了潮汐写过的春花秋月 : 我梦见自己被所有人怀在金色的蛋中,那种感觉妙不可言" : For me, it's the rich "texture" of words mixing emotion/fairy tale/folklores : /consciousness that is so interesting..... People mix them subconsciously : and that make modern poetry so beatiful~ : Here you can find the locks~~ :)
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c**m 发帖数: 1632 | 7 Why?
【在 c*g 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 扯淡。 : : those : influenced : folklores
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T**m 发帖数: 420 | 9 程尚是那个攻击过你的闻诗人嘴边的偶像,我也是听他说过的。应该很对你的胃口吧,
我喜欢第二首一些
【在 S*******t 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 这个人你听说过吗? 他写的是梦幻,说不好该不该喜欢,好是很好的,难为他怎么想 : 出来的 : : half~~
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S*******t 发帖数: 3956 | 10 哈哈,他也不算攻击我吧,他就那样的人,人倒不坏。我也是听他说起才知道的程尚。
程尚我说不好,过于理想主义,脱离现实,就像他自己说的,是把头颅埋在尘埃和星星
中。
我其实更喜欢的是在真实的世界中展现的诗意。
【在 T**m 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 程尚是那个攻击过你的闻诗人嘴边的偶像,我也是听他说过的。应该很对你的胃口吧, : 我喜欢第二首一些
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T**m 发帖数: 420 | 11 有一类这样的人,思维都很抽象,说起话来天南地北摸不着调,事实上这类人成为诗人
的可能性大很多也~~
【在 S*******t 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 哈哈,他也不算攻击我吧,他就那样的人,人倒不坏。我也是听他说起才知道的程尚。 : 程尚我说不好,过于理想主义,脱离现实,就像他自己说的,是把头颅埋在尘埃和星星 : 中。 : 我其实更喜欢的是在真实的世界中展现的诗意。
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c**m 发帖数: 1632 | 12 I am afraid you are right~~ hehe. Poetry is more or less a different way of
looking at this world, and I have to admit the best of them will have to be
slightly remote from the ordinary reality. :)
Poets always claim they are not used properly, they are the strategists blah
blah, such as Li Bai etc., but in reality, they can't even handle the
mundane stuff and they want to control and govern? What a jocuous fallacy is
that! hehe.
【在 T**m 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 有一类这样的人,思维都很抽象,说起话来天南地北摸不着调,事实上这类人成为诗人 : 的可能性大很多也~~
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y*******8 发帖数: 1693 | 13 这个锁好漂亮。NV是nevada?Vegas?
those
influenced
folklores
【在 c**m 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : No, never heard of. But from the style he wrote, he was influenced by those : 20th century french/spanish poets. Quite a few chinese poets are influenced : by those "surrealists", then they mixed the symbol/images with Chinese : traditional images, that's why you could see : "在贝壳里我睡了许久,忘记了潮汐写过的春花秋月 : 我梦见自己被所有人怀在金色的蛋中,那种感觉妙不可言" : For me, it's the rich "texture" of words mixing emotion/fairy tale/folklores : /consciousness that is so interesting..... People mix them subconsciously : and that make modern poetry so beatiful~ : Here you can find the locks~~ :)
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T**m 发帖数: 420 | 14 哈哈,你不小心打击了这里的诗人,他们很多博士,厉害着呢
of
be
blah
is
【在 c**m 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : I am afraid you are right~~ hehe. Poetry is more or less a different way of : looking at this world, and I have to admit the best of them will have to be : slightly remote from the ordinary reality. :) : Poets always claim they are not used properly, they are the strategists blah : blah, such as Li Bai etc., but in reality, they can't even handle the : mundane stuff and they want to control and govern? What a jocuous fallacy is : that! hehe.
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c**m 发帖数: 1632 | 15 It is a small ghost town in the middle of nowhere in Nevada. Its business
just builds on the fancy name of the town, "Lovelock". hehe. I went there in
the winter trip. I was so surprised to see Wells Fargo, Bank of America and
the police station are situated inside a single family house~~ haha.
【在 y*******8 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 这个锁好漂亮。NV是nevada?Vegas? : : those : influenced : folklores
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c**m 发帖数: 1632 | 16 Yup..... Sometimes I think isn't Poet just another name of Don Quixote? :) /
/run for cover.
【在 T**m 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 哈哈,你不小心打击了这里的诗人,他们很多博士,厉害着呢 : : of : be : blah : is
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k*********e 发帖数: 238 | 17 闻香攻击过兔子?我记得兔子一出来闻香就说高手来着,还是我错过啥了
【在 T**m 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 程尚是那个攻击过你的闻诗人嘴边的偶像,我也是听他说过的。应该很对你的胃口吧, : 我喜欢第二首一些
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y*******8 发帖数: 1693 | 18 这些地名都好好玩噢
in
and
【在 c**m 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : It is a small ghost town in the middle of nowhere in Nevada. Its business : just builds on the fancy name of the town, "Lovelock". hehe. I went there in : the winter trip. I was so surprised to see Wells Fargo, Bank of America and : the police station are situated inside a single family house~~ haha.
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