S*****r
发帖数: 1272 | 1 skytour has been forbidden to post on piebridge for 3 days
Because of his repeated insulting and discriminating posts, Skytour has
been
forbidden to post on piebridge for 3 days. If he does this again when he
comes back, I will fuck him for 14 days directly. |
s*********r
发帖数: 2575 | 2 建议最后一句改成：
I will fuck him repeatedly.
【在 S*****r 的大作中提到】
: skytour has been forbidden to post on piebridge for 3 days
: Because of his repeated insulting and discriminating posts, Skytour has
: been
: forbidden to post on piebridge for 3 days. If he does this again when he
: comes back, I will fuck him for 14 days directly.
|
G****e
发帖数: 11198 | 3 repeated 是错的，副词修饰repeatedly insulting
. If he does this again when he comes back, ...
when should be after
这英语感觉有问题啊。 |
G*******n
发帖数: 6889 | 4 逼格不够，没有用让白牛倾倒的hereonafter |
