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发帖数: 20 | 1 这是朱溪瑞七岁时写的歌词：
A Great Day
By Sherry Zhu
(5/5/10)
I like to feel the clouds.
I want to see the green grass grow, oh-oh
I wish I can look at the flowers blooming.
I wish I can see the sky so blue and nice.
A great day!
Tell your friends to look at the flowers bed ed, ed .
Look at that grass grow green as can be e, e ,e .
Look at the things you never saw before ore, ore , ore.
A great day! | g*m
发帖数: 4659 | 2 不押韵，当然对孩子可能难了点。
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: 这是朱溪瑞七岁时写的歌词：
: A Great Day
: By Sherry Zhu
: (5/5/10)
: I like to feel the clouds.
: I want to see the green grass grow, oh-oh
: I wish I can look at the flowers blooming.
: I wish I can see the sky so blue and nice.
: A great day!
: Tell your friends to look at the flowers bed ed, ed .
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发帖数: 954 | 3 wish 后边不都应该是could吗？这个这边长大的孩子口语应该都习惯这么说，不用想吗
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