A**H
发帖数: 4797 | 1 不看括号里我的注释，你能看懂吗？
I giv my findr a prevint and I giv Estr egg
(I gave my friend a present and I gave Easter eggs)
and I frgot to brEing three Estr egg to him.
(and I forgot to bring three Easter eggs to him. He asked me how to
spell three)
and I brEing a transformors ship and I brEing to cars
(and I bring a transformer ship and I bring two cars)
and there is a nembr one ras car andin a Bra car
(and there is a number one race care and a grey car. 你好歹也拼成gra car
好不
。看到这个胸罩车，我决定要介入他的拼写了，以免更多的歧义。)
and the Estr egg ther s cande inside the Estr eggs
(and the Easter egg there is candy inside the Easter eggs)
and I wish can drEing shEld
(and I wish can bring shield. by shield，他其实是指飞盘。)
and he said I lik this Transformrs ship best at aL
(and he --- 他朋友 --- said I like this Transformer ship the best at
all)
and he said I wish I can with you you tomoro
(and he said I wish I can play with you tomorrow)
But I am going to costco to eating.
(终于一个没有拼写错误的句子。他坚持要写成吃ing。)
But my dde said we can eat thn paly with gavin.
(But my dad said we can eat then play with Gavin. 终于知道了他朋友的名字)
But gavins brthday is on june his mom said.
(But Gavins birthday is on june, his mom said. 小朋友盖文提前好几个月就开始
天天念叨他的生日！)
and my dad said where are his other baby and his Big brother. thats
w(h)en
we (are) at the mails. and the end.
(帮小朋友拼了other and brother。小朋友在拼兄弟这个词的时候就说这个字肯定很长
。整篇文章都很主题突出，到了最后两句怎么就歪走了。估计是小朋友还想写，却不知
到写什么了，就回忆当时的情况想起来我问了这么一句。)
本来今天心情相当糟糕的，看到小朋友写了这么长一大段文章，豁然开朗了许多，决定
把这篇雄文向大家朗诵一下。这个估计是小朋友的第十篇文章。去年寒假回中国的时候
，老师给了一本作文本说是要写游记。我心里说读K的人就写文章，句子都说不通顺呐
。当时基本上就是两三天写一句话的游记。不过那时的最后一篇很有点意思：It's not
Christmas, but it is a little bit snowing. 很合老爹我的胃口。 |
m**k
发帖数: 18660 | 2 有意思啊。很不错
【在 A**H 的大作中提到】
: 不看括号里我的注释，你能看懂吗？
: I giv my findr a prevint and I giv Estr egg
: (I gave my friend a present and I gave Easter eggs)
: and I frgot to brEing three Estr egg to him.
: (and I forgot to bring three Easter eggs to him. He asked me how to
: spell three)
: and I brEing a transformors ship and I brEing to cars
: (and I bring a transformer ship and I bring two cars)
: and there is a nembr one ras car andin a Bra car
: (and there is a number one race care and a grey car. 你好歹也拼成gra car
|
s**********s
发帖数: 372 | 3 这么长一篇。真不错。
【在 A**H 的大作中提到】
: 不看括号里我的注释，你能看懂吗？
: I giv my findr a prevint and I giv Estr egg
: (I gave my friend a present and I gave Easter eggs)
: and I frgot to brEing three Estr egg to him.
: (and I forgot to bring three Easter eggs to him. He asked me how to
: spell three)
: and I brEing a transformors ship and I brEing to cars
: (and I bring a transformer ship and I bring two cars)
: and there is a nembr one ras car andin a Bra car
: (and there is a number one race care and a grey car. 你好歹也拼成gra car
|
h*********e
发帖数: 6997 | 4 有的可写是最主要的，拼写大了就慢慢好了。
乍一看还挺象德语什么的，挺好，哈哈。
【在 A**H 的大作中提到】
: 不看括号里我的注释，你能看懂吗？
: I giv my findr a prevint and I giv Estr egg
: (I gave my friend a present and I gave Easter eggs)
: and I frgot to brEing three Estr egg to him.
: (and I forgot to bring three Easter eggs to him. He asked me how to
: spell three)
: and I brEing a transformors ship and I brEing to cars
: (and I bring a transformer ship and I bring two cars)
: and there is a nembr one ras car andin a Bra car
: (and there is a number one race care and a grey car. 你好歹也拼成gra car
|
D**********R
发帖数: 25234 | 5 哈哈哈，赞bra car。。。。
话说我基本能看懂。。。 |
A**H
发帖数: 4797 | 6 小朋友写上瘾了，今天又是洋洋洒洒好几句话。要我翻译润色一下就是
我回家一个小红点跟着我。
我上楼一个小红点跟着我。
我下楼一个小红点跟着我。
我上车一个小红点跟着我。
原来是一个激光笔，按上面是小红点，按下面是大紫点。
盖文的生日六月份才到。
要是能明年中文能写成这样，我肯定要高兴坏了。我就没有教过小朋友写中文，准备到
时候直接上电脑打字得了。
谢谢斑竹的马克包子。 |
y******5
发帖数: 3836 | |
P***s
发帖数: 11672 | 8 进来一看，整个一个xmjdh!
【在 A**H 的大作中提到】
: 不看括号里我的注释，你能看懂吗？
: I giv my findr a prevint and I giv Estr egg
: (I gave my friend a present and I gave Easter eggs)
: and I frgot to brEing three Estr egg to him.
: (and I forgot to bring three Easter eggs to him. He asked me how to
: spell three)
: and I brEing a transformors ship and I brEing to cars
: (and I bring a transformer ship and I bring two cars)
: and there is a nembr one ras car andin a Bra car
: (and there is a number one race care and a grey car. 你好歹也拼成gra car
|
A**H
发帖数: 4797 | 9 K
【在 y******5 的大作中提到】
: 几岁啊 ，真能写
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A**H
发帖数: 4797 | 10 我们哪，难得有机会让你（们）xmjdh的
【在 P***s 的大作中提到】
: 进来一看，整个一个xmjdh!
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q****6
发帖数: 837 | 11 very good for a K student!
【在 A**H 的大作中提到】
: 不看括号里我的注释，你能看懂吗？
: I giv my findr a prevint and I giv Estr egg
: (I gave my friend a present and I gave Easter eggs)
: and I frgot to brEing three Estr egg to him.
: (and I forgot to bring three Easter eggs to him. He asked me how to
: spell three)
: and I brEing a transformors ship and I brEing to cars
: (and I bring a transformer ship and I bring two cars)
: and there is a nembr one ras car andin a Bra car
: (and there is a number one race care and a grey car. 你好歹也拼成gra car
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