z**w 发帖数: 69 | 1 since u've MPed, lemme brick a little.
1. composition. even for such micro/pseudo-micro photography
composition is still important. the leaves occupy the whole
picture here, too crowded. should have left some space to breath.
another choice is to shoot only part of one leaf to show the details
in texture and color change.
2. background. should avoid the half-bright, half-black background.
the bright sky is uncomfortable.
3. not se4 enough.
4. no tech parameters, film, lens, blah. |
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