C******d 发帖数: 1022 | | p********e 发帖数: 1944 | 2 第一,三张色彩不错,但是感觉有点歪,镜头校正比较好
第二张视觉引导比较好,但是人物的位置不太理想。
个人意见~
帮顶一下吧 等高手来指导 | m******1 发帖数: 19713 | | l******g 发帖数: 2076 | 4 我比较喜欢2和3.
3右侧亮一点或许好点。
2的话,尝试一下小光圈长时间曝光,让 人流 动起来?
1的话,比较压抑,有点没有灵气的感觉。不过如果换成晚上,车头灯大开,暗沉中透
射锐利。
可能会是别样的意境。
个人意见,仅供参考。 | b*****t 发帖数: 3928 | | C******d 发帖数: 1022 | | o**s 发帖数: 3412 | 7 I like them. You are getting there but not quite there yet.
#1. i love the shadows and the lines, but the car is really not interesting
of a focal point
#2, i love the colors and the curvy line that leads the eyes, but the people
at the end is not interesting, thus lack of a focal point.
#3, this one i like the least, the light is not so interesting, the person
is not so interesting. The lines are nice. |
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