G***G
发帖数: 16778 | 1 Leave you for a while
GoooG
Please stop asking me
"do you really care about me?"
I hate to hear your yelling
I cannot say something to you
when you are crying.
There is lots of things we cannot work out.
I know my fault in my heart.
I just cannot kiss you now.
It's been a year when we was married.
I wish I could change.
I tried to forget it all.
But I cannot.
I will leave you for a while.
I don't think you can understand. |
h******t
发帖数: 104 | 2 some grammatical problems:
There is lots of things => are
It's been a year when we was married. => since we were married.
then rhythms:
the following sentences are not rhymed at all:
It's been a year when we was married.
I wish I could change.
don't think you can understand. |
v*******u
发帖数: 58 | 3 whatever
【在 h******t 的大作中提到】
: some grammatical problems:
: There is lots of things => are
: It's been a year when we was married. => since we were married.
: then rhythms:
: the following sentences are not rhymed at all:
: It's been a year when we was married.
: I wish I could change.
: don't think you can understand.
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a****i
发帖数: 31 | |
