s**t
发帖数: 17016 | 1 A storm forms inside the grape
with breezes and sunshine outside.
Its purple skin covers my fanaticism and lasciviousness.
Its purple skin searches for another purple skin.
Two grapes touch each other, but their sweetness
cannot be exchanged.
A storm trapped in the grape
is sweet and black in the mouth.
I close my mouth, and no butterfly
flutters out of the whirl. | S*******t
发帖数: 3956 | | s**t
发帖数: 17016 | 3 修改了一下。将来肯定还要不停打磨。
【在 S*******t 的大作中提到】
: 喜欢最后一句，觉得句子还要再顺一顺
| n*****r
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