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Poetry版 - Love
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s**t
发帖数: 17016
1
If there is a hole in your heart,
then a snake will fill in it.
Every hole in heart is a snake hole.
Snakes are everywhere,
poking their heads in the air,
hungrily, seeking for a place to rest.
But you can’t see them.
All you see are smiles,
smiling people, smiling snakes.
If there isn’t a hole in your heart,
then, you will be a snake.
In the snake eyes holes
are everywhere. I saw two snakes
intertwined with each other somewhere,
the most dangerous scene I have seen.
As we talk about poems and arts,
an invisible snake is tempting you, and you
are the flower in invisible armor.
Under the invisible armor,
your heart is bleeding.
Both of us are smiling, so alone
that we must fall into love.
What’s love? Love is sacrifice.
Sacrifice your body and sacrifice your soul
to a demon.
L****o
发帖数: 1642
2
这首的语感就不如Dream。

【在 s**t 的大作中提到】
: If there is a hole in your heart,
: then a snake will fill in it.
: Every hole in heart is a snake hole.
: Snakes are everywhere,
: poking their heads in the air,
: hungrily, seeking for a place to rest.
: But you can’t see them.
: All you see are smiles,
: smiling people, smiling snakes.
: If there isn’t a hole in your heart,

s**t
发帖数: 17016
3
这一个写的有些吓人

【在 L****o 的大作中提到】
: 这首的语感就不如Dream。
w*a
发帖数: 2138
4
我读起来更有散文的感觉。可能因为有逻辑感。

【在 L****o 的大作中提到】
: 这首的语感就不如Dream。
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