c****u 发帖数: 3277 | 1 The point is that whether a poem is good or bad is never a big concern.
You write one poem just because you have something to say, not because
you hope to write a good poem. So why bother asking for other's opinions
here. Actually you could even PREDICT their opinions, which are totally
predictable. I don't think yours are bad at all. Also, what is wrong
to write BAD poems? I'd only say I like one or I don't like one, but I'd
never say one poem is bad, the other is good. There is even no univers | v*******e 发帖数: 3714 | 2 自称"艺术"就算了吧!不是什么人随便有点想法往纸上弄几句话
断个行就创造出艺术来了.
你自己不在乎写得好坏,这态度没什么.只不过我若真关心你,大
约会认真提出这个观点对于你水平进步实是一个大障碍.不管写
诗还是作别的什么,有所要求才会有所得到,任何进步都不是偶然
的,而是做事的人自己刻苦为之,日积月累,方有小成---有人也许
可以大成,那是福分,有人也许无成,那也是宿命的一种也许.. |
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