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发帖数: 2024 | 1 【 以下文字转载自 Literature 讨论区 】
发信人: aixiaoke (流浪者的乡愁), 信区: Literature
标 题: 【英文短篇小说】The Day I Died
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Mon Jul 27 19:55:12 2009, 美东)
I died three hours ago.
I was walking down Stockton street when I fell into a gutter. It was foggy,
cold, dull, a typical June day in San Francisco. It was almost dark. Most
food shops were closing, only a handful of grocery stores were still open,
waiting for the last few customers to scoop up the last pieces of tomato,
bok choys, zucchinis, and dark sp | h******9
发帖数: 332 | | M*********m
发帖数: 2024 | 3 The author made a swift turn at the end to make the story resonating, but
she didn't want to write the sequel for that. It is a short novel
competition for fun.... You want to participate too? :)
【在 h******9 的大作中提到】
: 这个是未完待续吗？如果不是，我没看懂：（
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发帖数: 9799 | 4 The author has bad grammar... | l*r
发帖数: 79569 | 5 难免的
大家多半都是新手，第一次写英文小说，能把意思表达清楚我觉得就很不错了
语法方面还得多写，多proofreading
【在 y*e 的大作中提到】
: The author has bad grammar...
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