i******t 发帖数: 22541 | 1 哪里需要改进
卧室独子, 父母都已经退休, 父母存款不多。
费用我来付
请问如何在信中 说明他们能回去的约束呢
帮忙提点意见
谢谢
August, 16, 2011
American Embassy Beijing,
Beijing, China
Dear Visa Officer:
My name is xxxx, currently a Research Scientist a txxx, Inc. I am writing to
invite my father Mr.xxxx, and my mother xxxx to xxx to enjoy a family
reunion.
Currently, they retired and will come and spend time together with me and my
wife from the October 15th to December 20th, 2011. After the trip, they
will go back to China for their new house closing in their home town.
I will show them around the campus of xxx University and the city where I’
ve been living. We will also visit some nearby attractions such as the
beautiful New York City within an hour, during weekends.
As the inviters, I will be responsible for all their expenses, including the
round-trip tickets, local transportation, food and board, insurance,
recreation, and any others that may occur. During their visit, they will
stay with us at xxxxx. We are willing to submit the offer letter from my
employers, recent bank statements, latest payroll stubs, W-2 and 1040 form,
and other information you might need. Please see the attached financial
support documents.
If further information is needed, please contact me.
Your time and consideration are deeply appreciated. I wish you a happy day!
Sincerely,
xxxx | f******s 发帖数: 713 | 2 我有一份邀请信可以做你的参考, 见站内信箱
【在 i******t 的大作中提到】 : 哪里需要改进 : 卧室独子, 父母都已经退休, 父母存款不多。 : 费用我来付 : 请问如何在信中 说明他们能回去的约束呢 : 帮忙提点意见 : 谢谢 : August, 16, 2011 : American Embassy Beijing, : Beijing, China : Dear Visa Officer:
| s******x 发帖数: 15232 | 3
重点不对
完全没有提任何“说明他们能回去的约束”
通篇都是说你在美国的情况如何,who cares你的情况
反而显示你父母连来美国的钱都要靠你这个刚刚工作的孩子出,你说这个体现他们在中
国的经济基础如何?
【在 i******t 的大作中提到】 : 哪里需要改进 : 卧室独子, 父母都已经退休, 父母存款不多。 : 费用我来付 : 请问如何在信中 说明他们能回去的约束呢 : 帮忙提点意见 : 谢谢 : August, 16, 2011 : American Embassy Beijing, : Beijing, China : Dear Visa Officer:
| M*******E 发帖数: 84 | 4 lz,我第一次也是像你这样写的邀请信,结果我爸妈没过
http://www.mitbbs.com/article_t/Reunion/31417067.html
签证官给的拒签理由就是像smallfox说的:你在国内没有紧密稳固
的社会关系或经济基础
这一次我在提到你写的信中这些内容后,又重点强调了爸妈一定会如期返回,并给出了
三个理由(爸爸还在工作、有房产出租、家里有老人需要照顾)。
然后爸妈今天去签证,过了。 |
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