i******t
发帖数: 22541 | 1 主要是 我要负担费用， 要体现 但是又不能表现出父母很穷没抢等
大家帮我提点意见：）
谢谢
August, 17, 2011
American Embassy Beijing,
Beijing, China
Dear Visa Officer:
Thank you for your attention to my parents’ B2 visa application. My name is
xxxxx , currently a Research Scientist \xxxxx, NJ.
I am writing to invite my father Mr. xxx, and my mother xx to
xx, NJ to enjoy a family reunion. They will spend time together with me and
my wife from October 15th to December 20th, 2011. I will show them around
the campus of xxx University and the city where I’ve been living. We will
also visit some nearby attractions such as the beautiful New York City and
Philadelphia within an hour, during weekends. They will enjoy a warm welcome
, meet my friends and
have an opportunity to see and experience the culture of the United States
while their visiting.
During their visit, they will stay with us at xxxxx NJ. As
the inviters, I will be responsible for all their expenses, including the
round-trip tickets, local transportation, food and board, insurance,
recreation, and any others that may occur. I am willing to submit the offer
letter from my employer, recent bank statements, latest payroll stubs, W-2
and 1040 forms, and other information you might need. Please see the
attached financial support documents.
My parents are both retired. They own a couple of real estate properties in
the city of xxx, Shandong province and enjoy full health insurance coverage
and generous pension. My parents have a big family in our hometown city of
xxx. They are well respected and enjoy their leisure time with a large
circle of friends and relatives.
They don’t speak English. After the trip, they will go back to China for
their new house closing before the end of this year. So, they will surely
return to China after the visit. If further information is needed, please
contact me at xxxx
Your time and consideration are deeply appreciated. I wish you a happy day!
Sincerely,
xxx | i******t
发帖数: 22541 | | s******x
发帖数: 15232 | 3 1 太长,关于旅行的内容太繁琐
2 太突出你的经济优势,把父母那点可怜的收入比下去了
3 最后这段才是有意义的,我来挑刺
My parents are both retired.
自己强调不利的地方啊
They own a couple of real estate properties in
the city of xxx, Shandong province and enjoy full health insurance coverage
and generous pension.
很好
My parents have a big family in our hometown city of
xxx.
很多人都有无数亲戚,但是一样不能阻止他们黑在美国
They are well respected and enjoy their leisure time with a large
circle of friends and relatives.
很多人都有无数亲戚朋友,但是一样不能阻止他们黑在美国
They don’t speak English.
很多人不讲英文,但是一样不能阻止他们黑在美国
After the trip, they will go back to China for
their new house closing before the end of this year.
很好
So, they will surely
return to China after the visit.
不要帮签证官下判断,人家心里有杆秤,不需要你来教
If further information is needed, please
contact me at xxxx | i******t
发帖数: 22541 | 4 多谢
像如下修改
1 去掉 My parents are both retired.
2 简化旅行
3 太突出你的经济优势,把父母那点可怜的收入比下去了 这块 不好拿捏啊。
我负责费用但是也不能表现的父母没钱负担
这块如何修改呢
后面 不说英语，去掉
后面有很多亲戚朋友 受到尊重 还是留着吧还算有点约束力吧
any comment？多谢了
coverage
【在 s******x 的大作中提到】
: 1 太长,关于旅行的内容太繁琐
: 2 太突出你的经济优势,把父母那点可怜的收入比下去了
: 3 最后这段才是有意义的,我来挑刺
: My parents are both retired.
: 自己强调不利的地方啊
: They own a couple of real estate properties in
: the city of xxx, Shandong province and enjoy full health insurance coverage
: and generous pension.
: 很好
: My parents have a big family in our hometown city of
| i******t
发帖数: 22541 | 5 修改如下
有何意见
1 旅行计划 如何缩减呢
2 经济问题那块 如何修改啊，我负责费用但是也要体现他们的经济实力。这块难办
望指点一下
谢谢
Thank you for your attention to my parents’ B2 visa application. My
name is xxxxx , currently a Research Scientist \xxxxx, NJ.
I am writing to invite my father Mr. xxx, and my mother xx to xx, NJ
to enjoy a family reunion. They will spend time together with me and
my wife from October 15th to December 20th, 2011. We will visit some
nearby attractions such as the beautiful New York City and
Philadelphia within an hour, during weekends.
They own a couple of real estate properties in the city of xxx,
Shandong
province and enjoy full health insurance coverage and generous
pension. After the trip, they will go back to China
for their new house closing before the end of this year.
My parents have a big family in our hometown city of
xxx. They are well respected and enjoy their leisure time with a large
circle of friends and relatives. During their visit,
they will stay with us at xxxxx NJ. As the inviters, I will be
responsible for all their expenses。 Please see the attached
support documents for details.
If further information is needed, please contact me at xxxx
Your time and consideration are deeply appreciated. I wish you a happy
day!
Sincerely, | i******t
发帖数: 22541 | | r*****l
发帖数: 2859 | 7 你的信中规中矩。我感觉签证官看了不会有太深印象，即不能给他们很大帮助。另一方
面，也没有什么反面的影响。
我的一点建议，有点走偏锋：
1，退休以后，它们一定也像很多退休的人一样觉得孤独。然后找些业余乐趣，比如说
旅游，跳舞，下棋，等等。旅游，它们每年都出去玩，今年想到你这里来玩，顺便看看
你的生活是不是像你说得那么好。毕竟父母关心孩子嘛。眼见为实。跳舞，下棋等等，
它们在当地都有自己的合适的棋友，水平相当，气味相投的棋友可不是容易找的。
2，你看到有些朋友的父母到美国来住长了不适应：不会英语，不会开车，觉得没意思
。所以你把他们的日程排的满满的：请假陪他们玩，安排旅游团...希望他们不要过两
个星期就要吵着回去:)。
3，既然他们有多个房子，那他们应该租出去了，有理由留在山东照顾自己的房子的。
4，既然提到了new house closing，记住准备相关的材料。
is
【在 i******t 的大作中提到】
: 主要是 我要负担费用， 要体现 但是又不能表现出父母很穷没抢等
: 大家帮我提点意见：）
: 谢谢
: August, 17, 2011
: American Embassy Beijing,
: Beijing, China
: Dear Visa Officer:
: Thank you for your attention to my parents’ B2 visa application. My name is
: xxxxx , currently a Research Scientist \xxxxx, NJ.
: I am writing to invite my father Mr. xxx, and my mother xx to
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发帖数: 15232 | 8 http://www.mitbbs.com/article_t/Reunion/31435191.html
领会精神
不要拘泥于形式和细节
心中有剑，远胜于千招万式
【在 i******t 的大作中提到】
: 求修改意见 谢谢
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