p*****i 发帖数: 1281 | 1 麻烦各位达人帮忙看一下我给我妈的邀请信,首先介绍一下我家的情况:
1.邀请人是我,J2,独生女,没有工作,去年9月来美,今年6月份生娃,lg在学校做
postdoc。想请我妈过来照顾几个月,顺便旅游。
2.妈妈现在一个人,离婚20年,父母都已过世,国内亲人只有一个姐姐(也就是我大姨
)。
3.妈妈工作是会计,二线城市月入5K(有固定收支的银行账单),有小城市房产一套。
邀请信要点:
1.到美国目的:旅游,购物。
2.我妈负责在美旅行费用,我是旅行伴侣。
3.一定会回国的原因:继续工作,有姐姐和很多朋友,有宠物需要照顾(2只猫,并且
有从小到大的照片)。
问题:
1.为了表明需要在美国呆5个月,我写了很多旅游目的地,有必要么?
2.需要存款证明我妈能支付在美旅行费用和来回机票么?多少存款证明比较合适呢?
3.要不要提我6月份生孩子,妈妈想来看望外孙这个理由呢?提了害怕签证官认为我妈
过来带孩子,抢了美国人工作机会。
万分感谢啦!
ps, 邀请信开头和结尾借用了smallfox帮别人修改的版本,多谢多谢!
http://www.mitbbs.com/article_t/Reunion/31434431.html
Dear Visa Officer,
Thank you for processing my mother’s visa application. I hope this
letter can be helpful in the process.
My mom plans to visit U.S. in May because she has a 5 months long
vacation then. During her visit, she’ll stay with my family at ***. My
mom loves traveling and shopping. She went to Hong Kong in 2010 and
Australia in 2011. So we plan to visit NYC, Boston, DC, Los Angeles, San
Diego SeaWorld, Yosemite, Las Vegas, San Francisco and Yellowstone
National Park. We also plan to do some shopping at Lake George Outlets
and Woodbury Outlets. My mom will pay for the travel expense and I’ll be
her travel companion.
My mom will return to China before November because she is an accounting
in **** Company and there will be a lot of work to do at the end of the
year. She has a sister and many friends in China. And at home, she also
has two cats to take care of, one of which is 5 years old and the other
one is 3 years old.
Again, I greatly appreciate your taking time to process their
application. Should you have any question, please feel free to contact
me at ***-***-****.
Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
*** | u****b 发帖数: 51 | 2 Not a good letter. The visa officer would suspect your mom's visit. See
comment in your letter.
Letter should be simple and clear. Suggest to fill out one month vacation on
the 156 form.
Did not see strong ties in China from letter. However, Visa depends on how
you behave, not the letter.
My mom just got her visa on Feb 10. Three Qs: 1. why to USA: see my son and
grandchildren, 2. Whom do you live with (in China): my son (my brother). 3.
Been to USA before: yes. Got visa
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Dear Visa Officer,
Thank you for processing my mother’s visa application. I hope this
letter can be helpful in the process. (TOO MUCH WORDS UNNECESSARY)
My mom plans to visit U.S. in May because she has a 5 months long
vacation then (TOO LONG VACATION, UNREASONABLE). During her visit, she’ll
stay with my family at *** (UNNECESSARY). My
mom loves traveling and shopping. She went to Hong Kong in 2010 and
Australia in 2011. So we plan to visit NYC, Boston, DC, Los Angeles, San
Diego SeaWorld, Yosemite, Las Vegas, San Francisco and Yellowstone
National Park. We also plan to do some shopping at Lake George Outlets
and Woodbury Outlets. My mom will pay for the travel expense and I’ll be
her travel companion.
My mom will return to China before November because she is an accounting
in **** Company (HOW CAN A COMPANY KEEP THE JOB FOR 5 MONTHS) and there will
be a lot of work to do at the end of the
year. She has a sister (NOT IMMEDIATE RELATIVES) and many friends in China.
And at home, she also
has two cats to take care of, one of which is 5 years old and the other
one is 3 years old (WHEN SHE ARE IN USA, HOW ABOUT THESE PETS).
Again, I greatly appreciate your taking time to process their
application. Should you have any question, please feel free to contact
me at ***-***-****.
Thank you.
Sincerely yours, | p*****i 发帖数: 1281 | 3 非常感谢,我已经把160表上的来美时间改为1个月了,
在信上加入了还有一套房子在国内,
主要是客观条件确实也没那么多和国内的联系。。。
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【在 u****b 的大作中提到】 : Not a good letter. The visa officer would suspect your mom's visit. See : comment in your letter. : Letter should be simple and clear. Suggest to fill out one month vacation on : the 156 form. : Did not see strong ties in China from letter. However, Visa depends on how : you behave, not the letter. : My mom just got her visa on Feb 10. Three Qs: 1. why to USA: see my son and : grandchildren, 2. Whom do you live with (in China): my son (my brother). 3. : Been to USA before: yes. Got visa : -------------------------------------
| l******6 发帖数: 2695 | 4 楼主,你如果是怀着宝宝,就不要让你母亲提过来带宝宝的事,切记!!! |
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