h**********a
发帖数: 69 | 1 父母一起去签。爸爸之前工作需要来过美国，但是现在已经辞职在家炒股了。妈妈还在
单位里工作。大家帮我看看邀请函这样写行不行啊？谢谢！
Dear Visa Officer,
Thank you for processing my parents’ visa application. I hope this letter
can be helpful in this process.
My parents plant to visit the United States this fall. During their visit
they will spend several days with me at Boston, shop a great deal in the
outlets near Boston, and take a tour to visit highlights along the east
coast. We also plan to travel to Salt Lake City together and take a road
trip to the national parks in Utah.
My parents like travel very much. In recently years they have made their
trips to many places in the world, including South Korea, Singapore,
Thailand, and Indonesia. My father has also visited the United States
several years ago for business. This time, my mother decided to take her
annual leave for vacation in the United States, and they will have the
chance to explore some of America’s natural wonders during the beautiful
season of fall.
They will go back to work after the vacation. My mother works as a senior
engineer in a research institute within the China Southern Power Grid, a
Fortune 500 company in China. She has great responsibilities in her work. My
father is currently self-employed, focusing on stock investments. I
understand that he has a significant portfolio to manage and the Chinese
market is constantly changing. They have full medical coverage in China and
they will soon receive benefits from their generous retirement plans in
China. Also, they have several real-state properties rented out that need
attendance from time to time. Not to mention Xiaobai, their adorable
Pekingese dog, who requires daily cares.
Should you have any questions, please feel free to contact me 24/7 at 888-
888-8888 | h**********a
发帖数: 69 | 2 ding~
【在 h**********a 的大作中提到】
: 父母一起去签。爸爸之前工作需要来过美国，但是现在已经辞职在家炒股了。妈妈还在
: 单位里工作。大家帮我看看邀请函这样写行不行啊？谢谢！
: Dear Visa Officer,
: Thank you for processing my parents’ visa application. I hope this letter
: can be helpful in this process.
: My parents plant to visit the United States this fall. During their visit
: they will spend several days with me at Boston, shop a great deal in the
: outlets near Boston, and take a tour to visit highlights along the east
: coast. We also plan to travel to Salt Lake City together and take a road
: trip to the national parks in Utah.
| s*******r
发帖数: 2697 | 3 整体感觉还好，就是第四段陈述回国理由时感觉不是那么自然，有堆砌东西的感觉 | h**********a
发帖数: 69 | 4 嗯，是不是哪条可以删去啊？ 这段最难写了
【在 s*******r 的大作中提到】
: 整体感觉还好，就是第四段陈述回国理由时感觉不是那么自然，有堆砌东西的感觉
| h**********a
发帖数: 69 | | c**********n
发帖数: 13712 | 6 cong
【在 h**********a 的大作中提到】
: 已经签过了
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