z****0
发帖数: 363 | 1 儿子从K到二年级的同班同桌前天离开SanDiego，给他写了一封信和一副画，我儿子说
信写得很好，能不能让我帮他回一封。我看那幅是孩子画的，信的内容应该是大人写的
。考虑再三就答应了，但本人英文太烂。儿子本来让我昨天给写的，太忙没写，今天一
早就让我交作业，很无助啊，就上来了。
自从你离开后，
SanDiego的夜空就没了星星；
自从你离开后，
SanDiego的天空就下起了雨；
自从你离开后，
DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL就少了一颗
最灿烂的SUPER STARS；
自从你离开后，
我便少了一个最亲密的伙伴。
可知否
西雅图虽然常下雪，
洁白的世界因为有你
一定变得更加美丽
可知否
你虽然离开这里
但每一个同学都会想念你
可知否
你像一阵夏风吹过我的记忆之林 |
p********n
发帖数: 98 | 2 google翻译不错,润点色
Since you left,
There was no starry night sky at San Diego;
Since you left,
It began to rain all day here;
Since you left,
DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL missed the most brilliant super star;
Since you left,
I lost the most intimate partner.
Do you know that
Although it does often snow in Seattle,
It is YOU to make this white world more beautiful
Do you know that
Although you out of here
However, everybody will miss you
Do you know that
The recall of the past about you kiss my memory forest liking the wind over
the summer
加点啥?
I asked to the Hippo at San Diego Zoo: “XXX, where you are?”
The Hippo smiled with his huge mouth:”here you are, here you are…”
I asked to the Dolphin at Sea World, “XXX, where you are?”
The Dolphin jumped and answered:” ”here you are, here you are…”
So I know
You are always in my heart
and never leave!
【在 z****0 的大作中提到】
: 儿子从K到二年级的同班同桌前天离开SanDiego，给他写了一封信和一副画，我儿子说
: 信写得很好，能不能让我帮他回一封。我看那幅是孩子画的，信的内容应该是大人写的
: 。考虑再三就答应了，但本人英文太烂。儿子本来让我昨天给写的，太忙没写，今天一
: 早就让我交作业，很无助啊，就上来了。
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的夜空就没了星星；
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的天空就下起了雨；
: 自从你离开后，
: DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL就少了一颗
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O***n
发帖数: 13127 | 3 I lost the most intimate partner.?
This one might be too 肉麻，哈哈
【在 p********n 的大作中提到】
: google翻译不错,润点色
: Since you left,
: There was no starry night sky at San Diego;
: Since you left,
: It began to rain all day here;
: Since you left,
: DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL missed the most brilliant super star;
: Since you left,
: I lost the most intimate partner.
: Do you know that
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I*****y
发帖数: 6402 | 4 如果不看西雅图那句，好像觉得这小伙伴离世了
【在 z****0 的大作中提到】
: 儿子从K到二年级的同班同桌前天离开SanDiego，给他写了一封信和一副画，我儿子说
: 信写得很好，能不能让我帮他回一封。我看那幅是孩子画的，信的内容应该是大人写的
: 。考虑再三就答应了，但本人英文太烂。儿子本来让我昨天给写的，太忙没写，今天一
: 早就让我交作业，很无助啊，就上来了。
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的夜空就没了星星；
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的天空就下起了雨；
: 自从你离开后，
: DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL就少了一颗
|
O***n
发帖数: 13127 | 5 那就来句
without you...
without you...
把whitney houston的歌词抄上？
【在 I*****y 的大作中提到】
: 如果不看西雅图那句，好像觉得这小伙伴离世了
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p*********n
发帖数: 7788 | 6 寒雨连绵织思念，
同窗三载续友缘。
源深圣地雅图市，
伊妹（儿）传谊系吾侬。
谁能帮忙翻翻，我也很可能需要一封这样的祝福信。
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W********w
发帖数: 771 | |
s*********5
发帖数: 5637 | 8 你这不是给google translation难堪吗？=）
【在 p*********n 的大作中提到】
: 寒雨连绵织思念，
: 同窗三载续友缘。
: 源深圣地雅图市，
: 伊妹（儿）传谊系吾侬。
: 谁能帮忙翻翻，我也很可能需要一封这样的祝福信。
: ---------
: 欢迎到内蒙大草原做客吃蒙古包
: http://www.mitbbs.com/bbsdoc/InnerMongolia.html
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l*****a
发帖数: 14598 | 9 西雅图几年也下不了一次雪，还是改变一下你娃的印象吧
当然作为文学作品，他可以这么进行渲染
【在 z****0 的大作中提到】
: 儿子从K到二年级的同班同桌前天离开SanDiego，给他写了一封信和一副画，我儿子说
: 信写得很好，能不能让我帮他回一封。我看那幅是孩子画的，信的内容应该是大人写的
: 。考虑再三就答应了，但本人英文太烂。儿子本来让我昨天给写的，太忙没写，今天一
: 早就让我交作业，很无助啊，就上来了。
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的夜空就没了星星；
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的天空就下起了雨；
: 自从你离开后，
: DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL就少了一颗
|
p*********n
发帖数: 7788 | 10 805MM，咱们就来个洋泾浜翻译比赛吧？周未无聊来热闹热闹！
我早就发现你的英文很stick的！
【在 s*********5 的大作中提到】
: 你这不是给google translation难堪吗？=）
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p*********n
发帖数: 7788 | 11 M：你看，翻过来啦！难道不是不挺好吗？
Hanyu continuous weaving thoughts,
Friends classmate III contains added edge.
Source of deep holy city of Seattle,
Iraqi girl (child) transmission of Yi Wu Department of Lennon.
这下再可以翻成中文？
【在 s*********5 的大作中提到】
: 你这不是给google translation难堪吗？=）
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l****6
发帖数: 2325 | 12 英语同样很瘪的飘过…
说句心里话，这英语比起赚钱难多了，阅读还凑合着可以看看社区小报，这听说可就差
远去了。 |
L*****s
发帖数: 24744 | |
g*****y
发帖数: 6325 | 14 ”intimate partner“ 不是随便用的。。。。
【在 O***n 的大作中提到】
: I lost the most intimate partner.?
: This one might be too 肉麻，哈哈
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c******n
发帖数: 16403 | 15 性伴侣
【在 g*****y 的大作中提到】
: ”intimate partner“ 不是随便用的。。。。
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l*******s
发帖数: 197 | |
n**********r
发帖数: 2061 | 17 自从你离开后，
SanDiego的夜空就没了星星；
自从你离开后，
SanDiego的天空就下起了雨；
自从你离开后，
DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL就少了一颗
最灿烂的SUPER STARS；
自从你离开后，
我便少了一个最亲密的伙伴。
可知否
西雅图虽然常下雪，
洁白的世界因为有你
一定变得更加美丽
可知否
你虽然离开这里
但每一个同学都会想念你
可知否
你像一阵夏风吹过我的记忆之林
Since you're gone, the sky in San Diego has no stars.
Since you're gone, the sky in San Diego has only rains.
Since you're gone, Doyle Elementrary School's lost the most shining super
star.
And I've lost a close friend.
Do you know, the world becomes more pretty because of you.
Do you know, the classmates will miss you.
Do you know, you are the breeze over the forest of my memory.
【在 z****0 的大作中提到】
: 儿子从K到二年级的同班同桌前天离开SanDiego，给他写了一封信和一副画，我儿子说
: 信写得很好，能不能让我帮他回一封。我看那幅是孩子画的，信的内容应该是大人写的
: 。考虑再三就答应了，但本人英文太烂。儿子本来让我昨天给写的，太忙没写，今天一
: 早就让我交作业，很无助啊，就上来了。
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的夜空就没了星星；
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的天空就下起了雨；
: 自从你离开后，
: DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL就少了一颗
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n**********r
发帖数: 2061 | |
l*******s
发帖数: 197 | 19 Ever since your departure
San Diego sees no more stars in the dark night;
Ever since your departure
San Diego is soaked by rain with no rhythem;
Your departure took a super star
away from Doyle Elementary School,
and along with that,
a best friend from me.
Don't you know
Seattle does not need extra blanket of snow,
but your presence
makes the white world even more impeccable;
Don't you know
even though you said good bye
everyone of your classmates will miss you
and among them
I will carve your name in my memory
to which you are like a summer breeze. |
I*****y
发帖数: 6402 | 20 Sun Diego is never soaked by rain. This is so ridiculous, lol
【在 l*******s 的大作中提到】
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego sees no more stars in the dark night;
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego is soaked by rain with no rhythem;
: Your departure took a super star
: away from Doyle Elementary School,
: and along with that,
: a best friend from me.
: Don't you know
: Seattle does not need extra blanket of snow,
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s*******u
发帖数: 5796 | 21 人才啊！
【在 l*******s 的大作中提到】
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego sees no more stars in the dark night;
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego is soaked by rain with no rhythem;
: Your departure took a super star
: away from Doyle Elementary School,
: and along with that,
: a best friend from me.
: Don't you know
: Seattle does not need extra blanket of snow,
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O***n
发帖数: 13127 | 22 u are just jealous of his English, lol
【在 I*****y 的大作中提到】
: Sun Diego is never soaked by rain. This is so ridiculous, lol
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O***n
发帖数: 13127 | 23 楼主，版主赶快给干实事的发包子吧
多有才呀
【在 l*******s 的大作中提到】
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego sees no more stars in the dark night;
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego is soaked by rain with no rhythem;
: Your departure took a super star
: away from Doyle Elementary School,
: and along with that,
: a best friend from me.
: Don't you know
: Seattle does not need extra blanket of snow,
|
a*****e
发帖数: 172 | 24 I like this one...
【在 l*******s 的大作中提到】
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego sees no more stars in the dark night;
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego is soaked by rain with no rhythem;
: Your departure took a super star
: away from Doyle Elementary School,
: and along with that,
: a best friend from me.
: Don't you know
: Seattle does not need extra blanket of snow,
|
v********m
发帖数: 3531 | 25 LZ你就把中文信寄过去让他们自己用google翻译一下。
【在 z****0 的大作中提到】
: 儿子从K到二年级的同班同桌前天离开SanDiego，给他写了一封信和一副画，我儿子说
: 信写得很好，能不能让我帮他回一封。我看那幅是孩子画的，信的内容应该是大人写的
: 。考虑再三就答应了，但本人英文太烂。儿子本来让我昨天给写的，太忙没写，今天一
: 早就让我交作业，很无助啊，就上来了。
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的夜空就没了星星；
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的天空就下起了雨；
: 自从你离开后，
: DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL就少了一颗
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Z**4
发帖数: 1904 | 26 There ain't sun shine when you are gone |
l***a
发帖数: 519 | 27 lz 我觉得你最后一句，‘你像一阵夏风吹过我的记忆之林’，我不太理解，大风过隙
什么也留不下阿，所以稍微改了一下。希望有改动的地方你会喜欢。
There ain't stars since you are gone
Endless rain in the world I belong
Away you go from DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL
My friend
how well we had been get along
May Seattle became sunnier by your arrival
Since you take away sun shine from San Diego
Even the snow there would be whiter
Brightened by your innocent pure
You are missed here
You are missed dear
Deep inside the jungle of my heart
you are always there |
I*****y
发帖数: 6402 | 28 哦，经过你这一提醒，我看了一眼那贴才发现是。
【在 O***n 的大作中提到】
: u are just jealous of his English, lol
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A********0
发帖数: 3310 | 29 很给力
【在 l*******s 的大作中提到】
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego sees no more stars in the dark night;
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego is soaked by rain with no rhythem;
: Your departure took a super star
: away from Doyle Elementary School,
: and along with that,
: a best friend from me.
: Don't you know
: Seattle does not need extra blanket of snow,
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a******o
发帖数: 261 | 30 way too gay... sounds more like a love letter.
not part of the cultural norm and recommend a simple phone call or email |
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a****n
发帖数: 3082 | 31 这个不错
还押韵
【在 l***a 的大作中提到】
: lz 我觉得你最后一句，‘你像一阵夏风吹过我的记忆之林’，我不太理解，大风过隙
: 什么也留不下阿，所以稍微改了一下。希望有改动的地方你会喜欢。
: There ain't stars since you are gone
: Endless rain in the world I belong
: Away you go from DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL
: My friend
: how well we had been get along
: May Seattle became sunnier by your arrival
: Since you take away sun shine from San Diego
: Even the snow there would be whiter
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s*********5
发帖数: 5637 | 32 这首中文写得挺煽情，楼上翻译的也不错，你把美国人家父母写的也给我们学习一下吧。
窃以为二年级的男孩子的诗，还是写得浅显易懂一点他们更容易理解。给他们父母看那
就是另一回事儿了。 |
y****i
发帖数: 17878 | 33 ask your son to write something, anything, about how he truly feels.
【在 z****0 的大作中提到】
: 儿子从K到二年级的同班同桌前天离开SanDiego，给他写了一封信和一副画，我儿子说
: 信写得很好，能不能让我帮他回一封。我看那幅是孩子画的，信的内容应该是大人写的
: 。考虑再三就答应了，但本人英文太烂。儿子本来让我昨天给写的，太忙没写，今天一
: 早就让我交作业，很无助啊，就上来了。
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的夜空就没了星星；
: 自从你离开后，
: SanDiego的天空就下起了雨；
: 自从你离开后，
: DOYLE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL就少了一颗
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s*********5
发帖数: 5637 | 34 老yu又一针见血了。是的，孩子再简单的真情实感的信都比我们父母写得有意义得多。
【在 y****i 的大作中提到】
: ask your son to write something, anything, about how he truly feels.
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O***n
发帖数: 13127 | 35 侬哪能知道是老于，不是小于呢？
【在 s*********5 的大作中提到】
: 老yu又一针见血了。是的，孩子再简单的真情实感的信都比我们父母写得有意义得多。
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y****i
发帖数: 17878 | 36 it is a safe bet //hoho
【在 O***n 的大作中提到】
: 侬哪能知道是老于，不是小于呢？
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a**o
发帖数: 510 | 37 赞，太油菜了。版猪发包子吧。
【在 l*******s 的大作中提到】
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego sees no more stars in the dark night;
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego is soaked by rain with no rhythem;
: Your departure took a super star
: away from Doyle Elementary School,
: and along with that,
: a best friend from me.
: Don't you know
: Seattle does not need extra blanket of snow,
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b**k
发帖数: 633 | 38
油菜 油菜!
【在 l*******s 的大作中提到】
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego sees no more stars in the dark night;
: Ever since your departure
: San Diego is soaked by rain with no rhythem;
: Your departure took a super star
: away from Doyle Elementary School,
: and along with that,
: a best friend from me.
: Don't you know
: Seattle does not need extra blanket of snow,
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B********e
发帖数: 1199 | 39 发了发了
【在 a**o 的大作中提到】
: 赞，太油菜了。版猪发包子吧。
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s*********0
发帖数: 2045 | 40 No, this is so true "Ever since your departure, San Diego is soaked in rain"
.
【在 I*****y 的大作中提到】
: Sun Diego is never soaked by rain. This is so ridiculous, lol
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s*********a
发帖数: 9 | 41 我觉得您写的再好也不如孩子自己最真实的语言表达，您也应该让儿子懂得这个道理，
看了这首美诗，反而觉得很假，sorry, that's just my opinion |
