l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 1 Dear Mr. President,
As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
be very serious.
What can we do at this point?
I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
aforementioned.
You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
issue of visas to those countries that are not willing to or not able to
provide the US government the background materials of their citizens. Mr.
Tillerson plays a key role in this. So far it appears that Mr. Tillerson is
still absent-minded about the issue.
You should advise the secretary of DOJ, Mr. Sessions, to employ the best
attorneys in that department, prepare a strong and powerful appeal case to
the Supreme Court. Also advise Mr. Sessions to check strictly alien overstay
and deport decisively whoever falls in that case.
You should advise the secretary of DHS, General Kelly, to do thorough
background check on all aliens who entered the US without being vetted
properly. Flag them in the database.
You should advise the head of Bureau of Customs and Border Protection, to
continue the good job they have been doing. Keep those out of the country
who cannot provide proper and complete document, show sign of potential
threat to the US, etc.
It is time for the administration to work as a team. All the cabinet
members should fully understand and support your ideal and order.
Best regards, |
i**********k
发帖数: 5274 | |
n********d
发帖数: 7676 | |
S*******D
发帖数: 12188 | 4 兄弟你这英文太差了。美国总统不是你的下级。妈的我上司也从来没有给我写信说我
should干什么
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
b******n
发帖数: 3103 | 5 Should 这词用的不太合适。
奥巴马当总统时好像每天晚上亲笔回复几封公民来信，不知道川普是否还会延续这个传
统。也不知道这些信件是如何被筛选才能被呈送到总统办公桌上的。
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
b********e
发帖数: 1100 | 6 你这个everyone else怎么得出的？
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
B***o
发帖数: 549 | 7 通篇should?
你谁啊？
这是一个最让人反感的词！
老床看了火冒三丈，虽然你行文内容不错。 |
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 8 无所谓了，可以改成can，建议性的。不过作为保守派，今天脾气不好。
【在 S*******D 的大作中提到】
: 兄弟你这英文太差了。美国总统不是你的下级。妈的我上司也从来没有给我写信说我
: should干什么
|
S*******D
发帖数: 12188 | 9 我操。兄弟你可能很有想法，但你一定要好好练习英文。
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: 无所谓了，可以改成can，建议性的。不过作为保守派，今天脾气不好。
|
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 10 everyone else on our side, lol
【在 b********e 的大作中提到】
: 你这个everyone else怎么得出的？
:
: the
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a******5
发帖数: 2062 | |
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 12 你英文比我好，行了吧？
【在 S*******D 的大作中提到】
: 我操。兄弟你可能很有想法，但你一定要好好练习英文。
|
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 13 这个隶属于国安部，由于太重要，可以招进来开会。
【在 a******5 的大作中提到】
: CBP 不是一级单位，总统不宜亲自指挥。
|
b********e
发帖数: 1100 | 14 你这篇信完全是在打老川的脸，小心他一怒之下查你的绿卡
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
B***o
发帖数: 549 | |
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 16 作为极端保守派，非常希望老川狂操左逼
【在 b********e 的大作中提到】
: 你这篇信完全是在打老川的脸，小心他一怒之下查你的绿卡
:
: the
|
S*******D
发帖数: 12188 | 17 我写文章比美国同事们差远了。丫们写出来的东西能直接打印做为memorandum下发全国
。第一代移民的英文水平是普遍太差
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: 你英文比我好，行了吧？
|
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 18 我也不是他的下级，我是以一个选民的身份写信。语气有点硬，也还可以。
【在 S*******D 的大作中提到】
: 兄弟你这英文太差了。美国总统不是你的下级。妈的我上司也从来没有给我写信说我
: should干什么
|
B***o
发帖数: 549 | 19 大家还是认同你有想法、有思路的。
这个要肯定、赞。
虽然老床可能被你的信气得在白宫暴跳如雷，哈哈.
这分明是讨打的语气！
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: 作为极端保守派，非常希望老川狂操左逼
|
S*******D
发帖数: 12188 | 20 大哥你周围的同事多数都是老中老印吧？这已经不是语言问题了，是个文化问题。美国
人没有这种语气和人说话的
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: 我也不是他的下级，我是以一个选民的身份写信。语气有点硬，也还可以。
|
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l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 21 不在乎，比你好就行了。
【在 S*******D 的大作中提到】
: 我写文章比美国同事们差远了。丫们写出来的东西能直接打印做为memorandum下发全国
: 。第一代移民的英文水平是普遍太差
|
w*s
发帖数: 7227 | 22 赞热情，修改下，
今天朋友圈看到句话：说话让人舒服能说服别人，是一种顶级的智慧和软实力。
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 23 老子自己有business。随便你说。语言问题见仁见智。should有点硬，不过川普真应该
这么做，他几乎没有别的选择。
【在 S*******D 的大作中提到】
: 大哥你周围的同事多数都是老中老印吧？这已经不是语言问题了，是个文化问题。美国
: 人没有这种语气和人说话的
|
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 24 尼玛，Schumer今天刚说：Trump should drop labor nominee。不要太多。你自己英语
烂，就不要装逼了。
今天类似的，Rep Steve King：Trump should repeal DACA.
【在 S*******D 的大作中提到】
: 大哥你周围的同事多数都是老中老印吧？这已经不是语言问题了，是个文化问题。美国
: 人没有这种语气和人说话的
|
S*******D
发帖数: 12188 | 25 他说是还可以，他职责本来就是监督政府的。你这么说就是不把trump当自己人了
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: 尼玛，Schumer今天刚说：Trump should drop labor nominee。不要太多。你自己英语
: 烂，就不要装逼了。
: 今天类似的，Rep Steve King：Trump should repeal DACA.
|
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 26 叔也是监督川普履行竞选诺言，狂操尔等左逼的。叔不是他的亲戚，也不是他的朋友，
更不是他的下级。
【在 S*******D 的大作中提到】
: 他说是还可以，他职责本来就是监督政府的。你这么说就是不把trump当自己人了
|
M******d
发帖数: 486 | 27 我为楼主点个大赞。做实事永远比当批评家容易。Trump是否采纳意见是一码事，但楼
主的热心参与是另一码事。
楼主，如果你因为有太多的人打击你的计划而觉得有些气馁，那就想想当初老王组织飞
飞机时的境遇。
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 28 谢谢鼓励！时间仓促，就随便写了一点。
就是想告诉老川对付左逼需要团队协同行动。
【在 M******d 的大作中提到】
: 我为楼主点个大赞。做实事永远比当批评家容易。Trump是否采纳意见是一码事，但楼
: 主的热心参与是另一码事。
: 楼主，如果你因为有太多的人打击你的计划而觉得有些气馁，那就想想当初老王组织飞
: 飞机时的境遇。
:
: the
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G*****r
发帖数: 462 | 29 remove "I think"
as disgusting as "we must"
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
t**g
发帖数: 3107 | 30 should, can 都可以， 老床不会计较的。。。
写得好！！！！！！！！！！
发信人: luobo (菠萝), 信区: USANews
标 题: Re: 给老川写了封电邮，不知有用否？
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Thu Feb 9 20:49:23 2017, 美东)
无所谓了，可以改成can，建议性的。不过作为保守派，今天脾气不好。 |
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w*******z
发帖数: 90 | 31 应该说一些原则性的问题，提一些原则性的建议，而不是命令一些具体的事情。不认为
这封信写的好，估计已经在秘书那里被过滤掉了。 |
m***i
发帖数: 2013 | 32 我觉得很好，我要是是床总，看到选民这么铁板支持，有主人翁意识，还做免费智库，
几乎是痛心疾首的出主意，不开怀大笑才怪 |
j*******g
发帖数: 291 | 33 Dear Trump, I am a 太监 from China. I am really 急。 thanx.
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
f*****m
发帖数: 157 | 34 把you should全部改成"perhaps we can consider"... |
vx
发帖数: 150 | 35 服了lz英文。这口气好像他是总统
【在 j*******g 的大作中提到】
: Dear Trump, I am a 太监 from China. I am really 急。 thanx.
:
: the
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B*Q
发帖数: 25729 | 36 电邮分量太轻
最好亲自送到白宫门口
不接见不走 |
k**L
发帖数: 3630 | 37 确实.应该那个超大纸箱包起来.然后写上"open for surprise.".扔下就回头跑.川老大
肯定接见.
【在 B*Q 的大作中提到】
: 电邮分量太轻
: 最好亲自送到白宫门口
: 不接见不走
|
l*****6
发帖数: 7881 | 38 From trump:
You are fired!
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
l***o
发帖数: 7937 | 39 谢顶帖，lol
【在 l*****6 的大作中提到】
: From trump:
: You are fired!
:
: the
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M***M
发帖数: 923 | 40 你情商是挺低的。。。
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: 尼玛，Schumer今天刚说：Trump should drop labor nominee。不要太多。你自己英语
: 烂，就不要装逼了。
: 今天类似的，Rep Steve King：Trump should repeal DACA.
|
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e********r
发帖数: 2352 | 41 你这口气，SeattlePD对政治的主张我不太赞同，但这里他是挺认真的在给你指点，达
者为师嘛，没有什么面子上过不去一说，接受了就好，英文的提高就是这么过来的，多
写写，别人指点一下，很快就上来了，你这不说一声谢谢，孩子一样的硬抗，没有必要。
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: 老子自己有business。随便你说。语言问题见仁见智。should有点硬，不过川普真应该
: 这么做，他几乎没有别的选择。
|
B***o
发帖数: 549 | 42 大概只有总统他爹才可能这种口气
【在 vx 的大作中提到】
: 服了lz英文。这口气好像他是总统
|
W***o
发帖数: 6519 | |
D**S
发帖数: 24887 | 44 LZ used five "you should" in his so-called letter to the Orange Blob. LOL.
What the heck does he think he is? |
D**S
发帖数: 24887 | 45 You seriously question why they can use "should" to Trump while you cannot?
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: 尼玛，Schumer今天刚说：Trump should drop labor nominee。不要太多。你自己英语
: 烂，就不要装逼了。
: 今天类似的，Rep Steve King：Trump should repeal DACA.
|
D**S
发帖数: 24887 | 46 Yeah, 不开怀大笑 "These morons are so gullible they even take me seriously?
【在 m***i 的大作中提到】
: 我觉得很好，我要是是床总，看到选民这么铁板支持，有主人翁意识，还做免费智库，
: 几乎是痛心疾首的出主意，不开怀大笑才怪
|
s**********r
发帖数: 286 | 47
如果老床有个中国爹，可能。他亲爹？十有八九不会。
【在 B***o 的大作中提到】
: 大概只有总统他爹才可能这种口气
|
V*****i
发帖数: 9883 | 48 too long. Three paragraphs at most. Three sentences each paragraph would be
enough.
[在 luobo (菠萝) 的大作中提到：]
:Dear Mr. President,
:As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
:circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
:be very serious.
:What can we do at this point?
:I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
:of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
:necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
:aforementioned.
:You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
issue of visas to those countries that are not willing to or not able to
:.......... |
J**X
发帖数: 2433 | |
s**********r
发帖数: 286 | 50 萝卜，指定有用！老床看完，估计在想：难怪那些所谓的法官不屌我，就连他妈的新移
民都能用蹩脚的英文对我指手画脚，我这总统当的不必马桶舒服呀！
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
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s**********r
发帖数: 286 | 51 萝卜，指定有用！老床看完，估计在想：难怪那些所谓的法官不屌我，就连他妈的新移
民都能用蹩脚的英文对我指手画脚，我这总统当的不必马桶舒服呀！
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
H***3
发帖数: 821 | 52 通篇都是废话，还you should you should的
真把自己当这个国家的主人了？
trump搞这个immigration ban，完全是为了给自己选民一个交代。本来以为90天过去就
完了，没有料到会有这么大反弹。现在就是怎么体面结束的问题。但是现在看来民主党
一心要在这个事情上做文章，不可能妥协的了。
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
E**********d
发帖数: 253 | 53 "As everyone else"
kakaka.... |
R*********4
发帖数: 293 | 54 (￣▽￣)"，看到楼主英文，我真的笑了。
我刚收到项目经理的邮件，整篇格式大概是这样的
If...
should.....
else if ...
should ....
else if ...
should
else
should
issue 1
should
issue 2
should
issue 3
should |
C*********n
发帖数: 1032 | |
m****s
发帖数: 604 | |
n******u
发帖数: 4271 | |
g******s
发帖数: 68 | 58 Ask Trump to ban 8 countries: just add north Korea! Now the so call religion
ban is totally nonsense!
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
|
N*******r
发帖数: 935 | 59 看得我肚子都笑疼了。
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
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r*********t
发帖数: 4911 | 60 总统为谁服务？为什么不是国民的下级？
【在 S*******D 的大作中提到】
: 兄弟你这英文太差了。美国总统不是你的下级。妈的我上司也从来没有给我写信说我
: should干什么
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T*****s
发帖数: 366 | 61 写给床铺怎么贴到索男集中淫的网上来了呀？是你逼索男高尚上吗？贴到白鬼子的论坛
还能赚几声Chink听听。 |
E*******1
发帖数: 3464 | 62 LZ这you should的排比句，气势直接把老创吓死了，以为是宇宙大帝给人类最高指示了
，哈哈。。。一看就是个索南从不和老外打交道，语气太生硬了
然后老创回过神，发了条EO，以后公民或绿卡要考英文写作，责令ETS搞个像GRE essay
一样的作文考试，满分6分，4分以下不给过，LZ这篇作为2分文章评分范文 |
l****y
发帖数: 8847 | 63 正好用在限制亲属移民的bill里
essay
【在 E*******1 的大作中提到】
: LZ这you should的排比句，气势直接把老创吓死了，以为是宇宙大帝给人类最高指示了
: ，哈哈。。。一看就是个索南从不和老外打交道，语气太生硬了
: 然后老创回过神，发了条EO，以后公民或绿卡要考英文写作，责令ETS搞个像GRE essay
: 一样的作文考试，满分6分，4分以下不给过，LZ这篇作为2分文章评分范文
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b********e
发帖数: 1100 | 64 老川想一个黄皮真把自己当白皮了，下一个EO就遣返这厮
the
【在 l***o 的大作中提到】
: Dear Mr. President,
: As everyone else, I am dismayed by the ruling by the ultra-liberal 9th
: circuit. The consequence of this ruling, if not counteracted properly, can
: be very serious.
: What can we do at this point?
: I think you should convene a cabinet meeting that includes the secretaries
: of the State, DOJ, DHS, and CBP. The current situation entails the
: necessity of coodinated plan and action by all the departments
: aforementioned.
: You should advise the secretary of the State, Mr. Tillerson, to control the
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b*****g
发帖数: 2322 | 65 楼主乃治国之才，商鞅再世。欠收拾的部门就就该写带期限的行政令让他们忙得吐狗血
，到时间完不成就罚，罚完后再把自己人替换上去。
再黑点可以在法官家隔壁买栋房子，招待难民，派难民去法院学习美国法律，让第九法
庭的大法
官手把手教学，每天至少教学5小时。 |
o*******n
发帖数: 338 | 66 你这样写没毛病，估计和老川胃口，磨磨唧唧假客气他才可能不鸟你 |
m*********2
发帖数: 2788 | |
T*****s
发帖数: 366 | 68 LZ量量自己的JB尺寸，如果够大也可以给他老婆写一封。 |
k**L
发帖数: 3630 | 69 nonononono. 老川会复 " NO pussy no talk"
【在 T*****s 的大作中提到】
: LZ量量自己的JB尺寸，如果够大也可以给他老婆写一封。
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