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发帖数: 9094 | 1 Grade 4 Student Writing Prompt: Fictional Narrative “The Creature”
Writing Situation: Imagine you are walking down the hall at your school, and
you hear a strange noise coming from the classroom. When you go inside,
you discover that the strange noise is coming from an odd creature sitting
at your desk. | B******1
发帖数: 9094 | 2 The Creature
“Oh darn, I’m going to be later!” I thought while I hurried up the stairs
. I put down my backpack and noticed something. The classroom seemed to be
streaming light out of the window! Just as quickly as it had started, the
light coming from the window subsided. I quietly opened the door.
Strangely, nobody was inside except for something that was on my desk . . .
I looked at the thing more closely. It was green and had small, little
horns and tiny wings like a bat. It had a short snout and a very long tail.
And it was so small that it could fit in my hand. I thought it couldn’t
get any funnier, until it started walking and talking.
“Hello, I’m Ona. What’s your name?” It said.
“Oh, so it’s electronic,” I thought.
“What is your name?” Ona said, beginning to become impatient. “James,”
I replied absent-mindedly, still wondering if it had batteries or not.
“Come on. Follow me.” Ona said, zooming out of the classroom.
I followed her, yelling, “Wait up, Ona!”
She stopped at a meadow, with strange flowers that I’ve never seen before.
But their aroma smelled wonderful, though. Also, there was a cottage,
which looked like that it was made of wood. Ona went inside, and I followed
her footsteps as well, wondering what would happen.
Inside the cottage, an old lady wearing a faded purple dress was sitting by
a fireplace. Ona flew back to me and told me, “This is a person I know who
’ll take you back to your own world.”
“Would you come with me, Ona?” I asked.
“I will, but don’t expect me to be like this while your mom is there.”
Ona winked her left eye.
“Come.” Rasped the lady as she went into a small opening between two huge
bookshelves.
After I went through, I saw a pond as big as a stadium.
The lady started muttering some words. Then the pond shone red and I was
flying in a worm hole.
A moment later, I felt that my feet touched the ground. I realized that I
was back to my own room at home while Ona turned into a stuffed animal.
While I was hugging Ona, my mom came in.
“Did you have a fun time at school?” She asked.
I looked at Ona, now frozen but with a quirk smile on her face, and happily
replied “Yeah! Absolutely!” as I rushed down the stairs to get some food
for Ona. | I*D
发帖数: 40035 | | B******1
发帖数: 9094 | 4 It fits what you claimed: One does not need money to become happy! | I*D
发帖数: 40035 | 5 写得挺好的， 你儿子写得。。。
【在 B******1 的大作中提到】
: It fits what you claimed: One does not need money to become happy!
| N***M
发帖数: 4295 | 6 我怎么记得当年在国内上小学的时候没写过这种作文
净是春游回来写游记什么的 | c*h
发帖数: 33018 | 7 Wow，写得好长，好
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【在 B******1 的大作中提到】
: The Creature
: “Oh darn, I’m going to be later!” I thought while I hurried up the stairs
: . I put down my backpack and noticed something. The classroom seemed to be
: streaming light out of the window! Just as quickly as it had started, the
: light coming from the window subsided. I quietly opened the door.
: Strangely, nobody was inside except for something that was on my desk . . .
: I looked at the thing more closely. It was green and had small, little
: horns and tiny wings like a bat. It had a short snout and a very long tail.
: And it was so small that it could fit in my hand. I thought it couldn’t
: get any funnier, until it started walking and talking.
| B******1
发帖数: 9094 | 8 You were right. I only wrote one Scientific Fiction homework in middle
school.
Here they teach all kinds of naratives.
【在 N***M 的大作中提到】
: 我怎么记得当年在国内上小学的时候没写过这种作文
: 净是春游回来写游记什么的
| B******1
发帖数: 9094 | 9 好像当时有页数要求
【在 c*h 的大作中提到】
: Wow，写得好长，好
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| x**********3
发帖数: 1572 | 10 最感人的小学生做文之一....................................... | B******1
发帖数: 9094 | 11 Typo for slim rain "penny penny " | l***h
发帖数: 678 | | I*D
发帖数: 40035 | 13 lol。。。。。
【在 x**********3 的大作中提到】
: 最感人的小学生做文之一.......................................
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