M*******s
发帖数: 763 | 1 (Translated by MyFlowers)
Come to see me, or not,
I am still there,without being sad or happy.
Miss me in mind, or not,
the feeling is still there, and not going nowhere.
Love me back, or not,
the passion is still there, neither being more nor being less.
Go with me, or not,
my hands are always within your reach, and won't let go.
(not by DuoDuo but keep it here)
Come to my embrace,
or grant me permission to live in yor heart.
Without no further words, we fall in each other.
Have the Time Freezed, and have the World in Joy. | a******9
发帖数: 36 | | M*******s
发帖数: 763 | | l******9
发帖数: 53 | 4 Better than the versions I saw. Great Job! | S**********n
发帖数: 17 | | e********0
发帖数: 14 | | l*******n
发帖数: 41 | 7 恕我直言, 你的翻译基本上是字面加上自以为是的英文.
表达啰嗦言语繁复, 韵律方面更是惨不忍睹. | M*******s
发帖数: 763 | 8 Thanks livemilan, you are right. |
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