p****r
发帖数: 371 | 1 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
The Mitten
Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
bear went in the mitten, and then a mouse found a nice spot which was on
the bear’s nose. Then the bear sneezed. All of the animals flew out of the
mitten. Then the boy saw the mitten in the sky. He caught the mitten and he
went home and his grandma checked if he still had his mittens. And then his
grandma said: “Why is one mitten bigger and one is smaller?”
The End |
i****c
发帖数: 2092 | 2 zan!
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【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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h******y
发帖数: 861 | 3 也是K娃？赞阿！
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【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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k******d
发帖数: 1543 | 4 大赞
光拼写就了不起了
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【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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d****i
发帖数: 826 | 5 6岁会写这些字非常棒
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【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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p****r
发帖数: 371 | |
d********h
发帖数: 2275 | 7 很棒!太赞了.
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mitten, a
【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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p****r
发帖数: 371 | 8 有些词是问过爸爸妈妈的，不觉得总体来说是个故事，对于我这个没有看过这本书的妈
妈来说也读明白了，就小夸奖一下 :)
【在 d****i 的大作中提到】
: 6岁会写这些字非常棒
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: to
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: mittens
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p****r
发帖数: 371 | 9 多谢，达到BSO效果了，我这个妈妈心里也很美。。。
【在 d********h 的大作中提到】
: 很棒!太赞了.
:
: said to
: it
: mittens
: mitten, a
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b*********e
发帖数: 437 | |
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p****r
发帖数: 371 | 11 嗯，再次声明，非原创，是她自己复述的故事
【在 b*********e 的大作中提到】
: 挖, 才6岁就写那么复杂的文章.
: 赞!
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p****i
发帖数: 6135 | 12 牛！
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【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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DW
发帖数: 535 | 13 Super super...
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【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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s*******l
发帖数: 4870 | 14 写得真好！
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【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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A**u
发帖数: 2087 | 15 wow... very nice one!!
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【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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R******a
发帖数: 1096 | |
p****r
发帖数: 371 | 17 多谢大家的鼓励，本来非原创不敢上来显，嘻嘻，我们这里真是BSO友好舞台呀。。。 |
b******k
发帖数: 1773 | 18 nod nod
only 6!!!
【在 d****i 的大作中提到】
: 6岁会写这些字非常棒
:
: to
: it
: mittens
: a
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P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 19 赞，以后就用这个标准衡量牛娃。 ：D
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mitten, a
【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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l*****f
发帖数: 13466 | 20 这已经很牛了。。。
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【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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s*********8
发帖数: 939 | 21 so nice，女儿真漂亮
／／btw，K12这边灌水的ID的头像都真养眼啊
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【在 p****r 的大作中提到】
: 嗬嗬，周末早晨老大自己趴在饭桌旁边给写了个故事，我看完之后异常激动，不过老大
: 告诉我不是原创，是一本他们几天前读的书，因为自己喜欢，所以写下来了。异常激动
: 转变为小激动，不过还是决定来小小BSO一下，大家就不要拿牛娃的标准来衡量了 :)
: The Mitten
: Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his grandma. One day the boy said to
: his grandma: “I want a pair of snow white mittens.” His grandma said: “
: No. You will not find it in the snow. ” The boy said: “Yes. I will find it
: in the snow.” So the grandma sewed a pair of snow white mittens and the
: boy went outside to play. When he did not pay attention, one of his mittens
: fell of his belt. A hedgehog went in the mitten, a fox went in the mitten, a
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p****r
发帖数: 371 | 22 多谢，比我是漂亮多了，希望一直保持。。。:)
【在 s*********8 的大作中提到】
: so nice，女儿真漂亮
: ／／btw，K12这边灌水的ID的头像都真养眼啊
:
: to
: it
: mittens
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A**u
发帖数: 2087 | 23 真人更漂亮啊。。 。
【在 s*********8 的大作中提到】
: so nice，女儿真漂亮
: ／／btw，K12这边灌水的ID的头像都真养眼啊
:
: to
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: mittens
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