t********2
发帖数: 42 | 1 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢
谢。
XXX,
The XXX HR personnel sent me the offer package (as attached).
And I noticed the salary on this offer letter is XX,000 per annum, I
would say this amount is low if not very low.
Largely my information is coming from the private sources of the
comparable others’ salaries and the public sources of the 2010 NIH pay
model ranges (as attached, or on NIH website,
sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ), a detailed
explanation of NIH tit | T**********t
发帖数: 1604 | 2 沙发，等牛人来讨论。
XXX,
The XXX HR personnel sent me the offer package (as attached).
And I noticed the salary on this offer letter is XX,000 per annum, I
would say this amount is low if not very low.
Largely my information is coming from the private sources of the
comparable others’ salaries and the public sources of the 2010 NIH pay
model ranges (as attached, or on NIH website,
sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ), a detailed
explanation of NIH title 42 pay model is also attach
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢
: 谢。
: XXX,
: The XXX HR personnel sent me the offer package (as attached).
: And I noticed the salary on this offer letter is XX,000 per annum, I
: would say this amount is low if not very low.
: Largely my information is coming from the private sources of the
: comparable others’ salaries and the public sources of the 2010 NIH pay
: model ranges (as attached, or on NIH website,
: sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ), a detailed
| p*****m
发帖数: 7030 | 3 我觉得语气过于生硬了 "is low if not very low" "not-a-thin chance..." "many v
alid reasons driven me to do this" 听着有点怪 不诚恳。。。
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢
: 谢。
: XXX,
: The XXX HR personnel sent me the offer package (as attached).
: And I noticed the salary on this offer letter is XX,000 per annum, I
: would say this amount is low if not very low.
: Largely my information is coming from the private sources of the
: comparable others’ salaries and the public sources of the 2010 NIH pay
: model ranges (as attached, or on NIH website,
: sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ), a detailed
| p****y
发帖数: 23737 | 4 写这种信要有底气，底气就是如果你跟这个老板闹翻了，你有退路，你可以很快
找到另一个职位，没有他的推荐信不会影响你找工作。如果你没有底气，那就要
低声下气很有礼貌地询问加薪的可能性。这封信的口气比较硬，也有点长/啰嗦。
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢
: 谢。
: XXX,
: The XXX HR personnel sent me the offer package (as attached).
: And I noticed the salary on this offer letter is XX,000 per annum, I
: would say this amount is low if not very low.
: Largely my information is coming from the private sources of the
: comparable others’ salaries and the public sources of the 2010 NIH pay
: model ranges (as attached, or on NIH website,
: sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ), a detailed
| T**********t
发帖数: 1604 | 5 我觉得lz应该把自己这几年对实验室的贡献和价值所在多说说，而不是光说自己干了有
多少年，那个似乎没什么太大说服力。many valid reasons得zkss。
v
【在 p*****m 的大作中提到】
: 我觉得语气过于生硬了 "is low if not very low" "not-a-thin chance..." "many v
: alid reasons driven me to do this" 听着有点怪 不诚恳。。。
| Q**********r
发帖数: 214 | 6 嘿，写这么长谁耐烦看啊？就说和我差不多经历的人都比我高，能不能给长点就完了。
不要怕给老板提这种要求，在美国就是会叫的孩子才有奶吃
good luck!
【在 T**********t 的大作中提到】
: 我觉得lz应该把自己这几年对实验室的贡献和价值所在多说说，而不是光说自己干了有
: 多少年，那个似乎没什么太大说服力。many valid reasons得zkss。
:
: v
| t********2
发帖数: 42 | 7 thanks, I will tune the language.
v
【在 p*****m 的大作中提到】
: 我觉得语气过于生硬了 "is low if not very low" "not-a-thin chance..." "many v
: alid reasons driven me to do this" 听着有点怪 不诚恳。。。
| t********2
发帖数: 42 | 8 the boss are very clear about my contribution, I do not need to spend much
language here, I think...
【在 T**********t 的大作中提到】
: 我觉得lz应该把自己这几年对实验室的贡献和价值所在多说说，而不是光说自己干了有
: 多少年，那个似乎没什么太大说服力。many valid reasons得zkss。
:
: v
| O******e
发帖数: 4845 | 9 注意措辞，找好下家
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: the boss are very clear about my contribution, I do not need to spend much
: language here, I think...
| w***a
发帖数: 4361 | 10 俺觉得贴那些attachemnt就免了吧，谁有空看那些pdf呀
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢
: 谢。
: XXX,
: The XXX HR personnel sent me the offer package (as attached).
: And I noticed the salary on this offer letter is XX,000 per annum, I
: would say this amount is low if not very low.
: Largely my information is coming from the private sources of the
: comparable others’ salaries and the public sources of the 2010 NIH pay
: model ranges (as attached, or on NIH website,
: sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ), a detailed
| | | l***y
发帖数: 638 | 11 都准备走了还吵吵着涨啥工资，直接走人不就完了嘛
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: the boss are very clear about my contribution, I do not need to spend much
: language here, I think...
| t********2
发帖数: 42 | 12 you need at least 1 year to GUODU right,
I am looking for a PI position, not another postdoc, by the way...
【在 l***y 的大作中提到】
: 都准备走了还吵吵着涨啥工资，直接走人不就完了嘛
| d*******e
发帖数: 1649 | 13 看写信的口气，这是在摊牌啊。
除非你决定走人了，有退路。同时做好最坏的打算。
祝你好运！
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢
: 谢。
: XXX,
: The XXX HR personnel sent me the offer package (as attached).
: And I noticed the salary on this offer letter is XX,000 per annum, I
: would say this amount is low if not very low.
: Largely my information is coming from the private sources of the
: comparable others’ salaries and the public sources of the 2010 NIH pay
: model ranges (as attached, or on NIH website,
: sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ), a detailed
| t********2
发帖数: 42 | 14 well, I actually snapshot the core points in the email
【在 w***a 的大作中提到】
: 俺觉得贴那些attachemnt就免了吧，谁有空看那些pdf呀
| t********2
发帖数: 42 | 15 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢谢
XXX,
The XX HR personnel sent me the research fellow offer letter (as
attached).
I found the salary is 59,000 / annum.
I think this number is low based on my information from the private
sources of the comparable others’ salaries and the public sources,
including the 2010 NIH title 42 pay model ranges (as attached, or
sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ) and its
detailed explanation (attached, or sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-
appt | K******S
发帖数: 10109 | 16 to be frankly, I don't think you can come up with a good letter (in terms of
wording) to your boss based on your English through this thread.
As a 3rd party, the tune of the letter makes me uncomfortable.
So I would suggest you to talk to your boss in person.
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢谢
: XXX,
: The XX HR personnel sent me the research fellow offer letter (as
: attached).
: I found the salary is 59,000 / annum.
: I think this number is low based on my information from the private
: sources of the comparable others’ salaries and the public sources,
: including the 2010 NIH title 42 pay model ranges (as attached, or
: sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ) and its
: detailed explanation (attached, or sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-
| t********2
发帖数: 42 | 17 thanks for the suggestion.
I just feel there will be no buffer if I raise these out to my boss face
to face... My boss may have some time to think about it before talking
with me directly. Your thoughts?
"In terms of wording", you mean the tune of the language,
terms of
【在 K******S 的大作中提到】
: to be frankly, I don't think you can come up with a good letter (in terms of
: wording) to your boss based on your English through this thread.
: As a 3rd party, the tune of the letter makes me uncomfortable.
: So I would suggest you to talk to your boss in person.
| j*****d
发帖数: 787 | 18 YAO YOU GU QI!
SET YOUR OWN LAB. AND BEAT YOUR BOSS.
HAHA, SHAN LA ~
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢谢
: XXX,
: The XX HR personnel sent me the research fellow offer letter (as
: attached).
: I found the salary is 59,000 / annum.
: I think this number is low based on my information from the private
: sources of the comparable others’ salaries and the public sources,
: including the 2010 NIH title 42 pay model ranges (as attached, or
: sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ) and its
: detailed explanation (attached, or sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-
| t********2
发帖数: 42 | | p****y
发帖数: 23737 | 20 太啰嗦了，帮你改了一下：
Dear xxx，
The XX HR personnel sent me a research fellow offer letter, as
attached, with an annual salary of 59,000. The salary is a little bit below
average, according to some private and public sources that I have found in
the field, such as the 2010 NIH title 42 pay model ranges (as attached, or
sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf, and its detailed
explanation (attached, or sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/
title42paymodel-2009.pdf ). It appears that my
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢谢
: XXX,
: The XX HR personnel sent me the research fellow offer letter (as
: attached).
: I found the salary is 59,000 / annum.
: I think this number is low based on my information from the private
: sources of the comparable others’ salaries and the public sources,
: including the 2010 NIH title 42 pay model ranges (as attached, or
: sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ) and its
: detailed explanation (attached, or sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-
| | | t********2
发帖数: 42 | 21 DA Ge or Da JIE,
thanks a million.
May I ask how you get such skills to write such nice English.
I simply can not do that...
I will keep you all updated. thanks again.
below
found in
attached, or
detailed
high end
postdoc),
【在 p****y 的大作中提到】
: 太啰嗦了，帮你改了一下：
: Dear xxx，
: The XX HR personnel sent me a research fellow offer letter, as
: attached, with an annual salary of 59,000. The salary is a little bit below
: average, according to some private and public sources that I have found in
: the field, such as the 2010 NIH title 42 pay model ranges (as attached, or
: sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf, and its detailed
: explanation (attached, or sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/
: title42paymodel-2009.pdf ). It appears that my
| k******n
发帖数: 133 | 22 How about
Dear Dr. XXX,
It has been a great pleasure working here for the last years. together we
have achieved a lots bla bla bla. Lately I have been thinking a lot about
my career and how to make our collaboration/team even more productive.
Can we can sit together and discuss about it?
Yours,
XXX
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: 我们实验室不差钱，所以没有必要讨论实验室都揭不开锅，怎么给你张工资的问题。谢谢
: XXX,
: The XX HR personnel sent me the research fellow offer letter (as
: attached).
: I found the salary is 59,000 / annum.
: I think this number is low based on my information from the private
: sources of the comparable others’ salaries and the public sources,
: including the 2010 NIH title 42 pay model ranges (as attached, or
: sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-appt/T422010PayRanges.pdf ) and its
: detailed explanation (attached, or sourcebook.od.nih.gov/personnel-
| t********2
发帖数: 42 | 23 Thanks for doing this.
But, I think I shall make very clear my concerns in the email.
I can give my boss some time to think it over before talking with me...
we
about
【在 k******n 的大作中提到】
: How about
: Dear Dr. XXX,
: It has been a great pleasure working here for the last years. together we
: have achieved a lots bla bla bla. Lately I have been thinking a lot about
: my career and how to make our collaboration/team even more productive.
: Can we can sit together and discuss about it?
: Yours,
: XXX
| K******S
发帖数: 10109 | 24 then just say
I just received the offer letter from HR. Thank you very much. However the
compensation is a little lower than my expectation based on my background
and qualifications. I would like to discuss this with you in greater details
.
And wait for his/her phone call.
【在 t********2 的大作中提到】
: thanks for the suggestion.
: I just feel there will be no buffer if I raise these out to my boss face
: to face... My boss may have some time to think about it before talking
: with me directly. Your thoughts?
: "In terms of wording", you mean the tune of the language,
:
: terms of
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