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h*****o
发帖数: 240
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大家来给改错啊
原意:
因为信息的准确性难以用数据报表的方式直观的反映出来, 所以对信息准确性的评估取
决于每此凭借此信息所作出的市场战略的效果. 如果此市场战略导致对新客户开发的障
碍和老客户的流失. 那么之前的信息来源或对信息的分析是不准确的.
Since intelligence accuracy cannot not straightforwardly(或说 practically?)
to be evaluated by numeric data on any kind of report, evaluation to data
quality have to indirectly referred to marketing reaction towards strategies
generated by the intelligence. If new strategy constructs barriers to
exploit new customer or leads to loss in repeat orders, the original
marketing d
O******e
发帖数: 734
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"Intelligence" has the connotation of military secrets.
I would prefer a different word, but need to know what exactly
you mean by 信息, which is really too vague.
Also, I think 准确性 literally translated as "accuracy" probably isn't
the right word to use here because you are saying that it is difficult to
evaluate the "信息" in quantitative terms. I think you might be talking
about the "credibility" of the 信息 or the "reliability" of the source
of the 信息.
For example:
"Central command told me that

【在 h*****o 的大作中提到】
: 大家来给改错啊
: 原意:
: 因为信息的准确性难以用数据报表的方式直观的反映出来, 所以对信息准确性的评估取
: 决于每此凭借此信息所作出的市场战略的效果. 如果此市场战略导致对新客户开发的障
: 碍和老客户的流失. 那么之前的信息来源或对信息的分析是不准确的.
: Since intelligence accuracy cannot not straightforwardly(或说 practically?)
: to be evaluated by numeric data on any kind of report, evaluation to data
: quality have to indirectly referred to marketing reaction towards strategies
: generated by the intelligence. If new strategy constructs barriers to
: exploit new customer or leads to loss in repeat orders, the original

h*****o
发帖数: 240
3
高人在线
小生有幸得在线指点..
这里信息指的就是商业信息.
另外你说得对, 用reliability 和 credibility比较好
多谢那个example, 收藏了
O******e
发帖数: 734
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商业信息 can still mean a lot of things, some that can be quantified
(numeric data), and some that cannot be quantified (competitor's
marketing and sales strategies, product development plans, etc.).
If the 商业信息 is quantifiable, you can question its accuracy and
I suppose its reliability (the data that you have may be accurate,
but incomplete in a broader context, and therefore maybe unreliable).
If the 商业信息 is not quantifiable, I think you would only question
its reliability. It sound a bit stran

【在 h*****o 的大作中提到】
: 高人在线
: 小生有幸得在线指点..
: 这里信息指的就是商业信息.
: 另外你说得对, 用reliability 和 credibility比较好
: 多谢那个example, 收藏了

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