为表彰在促进科学技术进步工作中作出重大贡献，特颁发此证书
下面的翻译感觉别扭，大侠们有何高见？
It is hereby certificated in recognition of the outstanding contributions to
the advancement of science and technology
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Pretty good already. How about this:
This certificate is hereby awarded to Dr. XXX, in recognition of the
significant contributions Dr. XXX has made to the advancement of the
sciences and technology.
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【在 g**********2 的大作中提到】 : 为表彰在促进科学技术进步工作中作出重大贡献，特颁发此证书 : 下面的翻译感觉别扭，大侠们有何高见？ : It is hereby certificated in recognition of the outstanding contributions to : the advancement of science and technology
