r*******n
发帖数: 135 | 1 1. Wrong: XX is top of the field.
correct: XX has risen to the top of the field of by his excellent
contribution as evidenced by ...
2. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work.
correct: XX has done excellent work on ...(in every detail, show evidence
!)
3. Wrong: XX is really a smart and clever scientist in his research field.
correct: XX is surely among the top few scientist in ...basing on ...(
must use facts!)
4. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work in the last few years.
correct: XX has contributed tremendously to the field of ...since he has
done .... from 2000 to 2010 (facts throughout all these long years!)
5. Wrong: XX is an outstanding young investigator.
correct: XX has been an outstanding and productive (omit Young!)
investigator in the field of ...(facts)
6. Wrong: XX has won Young Investigator award in 2010.
Correct: XX has done extremely extraordinary work in the field of...
Basing on what he has done so far...One of the biggest society in his field
has given him an award ...which composed of very competitive scoring and
extremely stringent selection criterions. DO NOT CLAIM ANY 'YOUNG' or "
Postdoc" awards independently as an item => Definitely RFE: this Young award
is not open to General populations in your research field.
7. Wrong: XX has done excellent work under the instruction of Dr. YYY.
Correct: XX has done excellent work and he has instructed a lot of his
colleagues and peers to do ...So, surely he has influenced his peers to an
extremely large extent.
8. Wrong: Draft in Chinglish.
Correct: must ask help from local USA with good English to revise all
your RLs.
Follow this Wrong/Correct format if you want to post your experience below.
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n*******g
发帖数: 448 | |
d*******n
发帖数: 1339 | 3 赞， 谢谢分享
evidence
【在 r*******n 的大作中提到】
: 1. Wrong: XX is top of the field.
: correct: XX has risen to the top of the field of by his excellent
: contribution as evidenced by ...
: 2. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work.
: correct: XX has done excellent work on ...(in every detail, show evidence
: !)
: 3. Wrong: XX is really a smart and clever scientist in his research field.
: correct: XX is surely among the top few scientist in ...basing on ...(
: must use facts!)
: 4. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work in the last few years.
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F**********0
发帖数: 442 | 4 this is what we need. thanks. |
x****1
发帖数: 1410 | |
C****y
发帖数: 1277 | |
n**z
发帖数: 4354 | |
A***M
发帖数: 249 | |
C*******d
发帖数: 3345 | 9 赞！
evidence
【在 r*******n 的大作中提到】
: 1. Wrong: XX is top of the field.
: correct: XX has risen to the top of the field of by his excellent
: contribution as evidenced by ...
: 2. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work.
: correct: XX has done excellent work on ...(in every detail, show evidence
: !)
: 3. Wrong: XX is really a smart and clever scientist in his research field.
: correct: XX is surely among the top few scientist in ...basing on ...(
: must use facts!)
: 4. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work in the last few years.
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b*******e
发帖数: 24532 | 10 thanks for sharing.
evidence
【在 r*******n 的大作中提到】
: 1. Wrong: XX is top of the field.
: correct: XX has risen to the top of the field of by his excellent
: contribution as evidenced by ...
: 2. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work.
: correct: XX has done excellent work on ...(in every detail, show evidence
: !)
: 3. Wrong: XX is really a smart and clever scientist in his research field.
: correct: XX is surely among the top few scientist in ...basing on ...(
: must use facts!)
: 4. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work in the last few years.
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j****t
发帖数: 1663 | |
k*****o
发帖数: 983 | |
L******9
发帖数: 866 | 13
evidence
【在 r*******n 的大作中提到】
: 1. Wrong: XX is top of the field.
: correct: XX has risen to the top of the field of by his excellent
: contribution as evidenced by ...
: 2. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work.
: correct: XX has done excellent work on ...(in every detail, show evidence
: !)
: 3. Wrong: XX is really a smart and clever scientist in his research field.
: correct: XX is surely among the top few scientist in ...basing on ...(
: must use facts!)
: 4. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work in the last few years.
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q****k
发帖数: 1023 | 14 Many thanks!
evidence
【在 r*******n 的大作中提到】
: 1. Wrong: XX is top of the field.
: correct: XX has risen to the top of the field of by his excellent
: contribution as evidenced by ...
: 2. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work.
: correct: XX has done excellent work on ...(in every detail, show evidence
: !)
: 3. Wrong: XX is really a smart and clever scientist in his research field.
: correct: XX is surely among the top few scientist in ...basing on ...(
: must use facts!)
: 4. Wrong: XX is doing excellent work in the last few years.
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S*********n
发帖数: 895 | 15 Very nice. Thanks for sharing |
v*******i
发帖数: 1007 | |
r*******n
发帖数: 135 | 17 补充：EB1: 不用将来时，少用现在时，多用完成时（已经作出重大贡献已经是Top few
！）。
NIW：适当用一些将来时倒是应该非常好：将要对美国的国家利益发挥重大作用！不过
也不能太多，好象也是‘已经对美国的国家利益发挥了重大作用！’听起来更顺耳些。 |
r**n
发帖数: 578 | 18 赞原作者，赞补充。对我这种菜鸟很有用。
few
【在 r*******n 的大作中提到】
: 补充：EB1: 不用将来时，少用现在时，多用完成时（已经作出重大贡献已经是Top few
: ！）。
: NIW：适当用一些将来时倒是应该非常好：将要对美国的国家利益发挥重大作用！不过
: 也不能太多，好象也是‘已经对美国的国家利益发挥了重大作用！’听起来更顺耳些。
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m****8
发帖数: 275 | |
i*****l
发帖数: 354 | |
j******e
发帖数: 696 | |
