n******8
发帖数: 558 | 1 Glacier
Once I hiked up a mountain on a winding trail.
The trail wound through the woods and meadow,
And led me to dream about a fairy tale.
Then I hiked along a creek in the mountain’s shadow.
The creek brushed the aged trees and rocky shore.
And led me to dream about an ancient chateau.
Instead of a chateau I reached a glacier floor.
The glacier mothered the creek and the mountain,
And led me to dream about a universe soar and roar. |
G**i
发帖数: 1292 | |
n******8
发帖数: 558 | 3 谢谢！
【在 G**i 的大作中提到】
: 好看
: 赞
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M********c
发帖数: 11672 | 4 喜欢。小小疑问，soar and roar 是不是有点过于押韵工整了？
加拿大今年所有公园都免费开放，想看冰川正是时候 |
n******8
发帖数: 558 | 5 谢谢， 有好的建议吗？
【在 M********c 的大作中提到】
: 喜欢。小小疑问，soar and roar 是不是有点过于押韵工整了？
: 加拿大今年所有公园都免费开放，想看冰川正是时候
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