n******8 发帖数: 558 | 1 Cello and his shadow
A lonely cello,
Talks to no one but his shadow.
In a tone like wavering willow,
In a color like mellowing meadow.
Till the sun flees.
Cello panics and pleas:
Shadow, shadow, stay with me!
For I will sing you nightly glee.
And my strings will never pluck sorrow,
For I need you every tomorrow. | wh 发帖数: 141625 | 2 哈哈,你真能找词,找到那么多ow!
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : Cello and his shadow : A lonely cello, : Talks to no one but his shadow. : In a tone like wavering willow, : In a color like mellowing meadow. : Till the sun flees. : Cello panics and pleas: : Shadow, shadow, stay with me! : For I will sing you nightly glee. : And my strings will never pluck sorrow,
| n******8 发帖数: 558 | 3 哈哈哈, 试着按照你的建议写, 有悠扬的感觉吗? 还是像顺口溜 :D
【在 wh 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 哈哈,你真能找词,找到那么多ow!
| t******g 发帖数: 615 | 4 有 every tomorrow 的说法吗?
:Cello and his shadow
:A lonely cello,
:Talks to no one but his shadow.
:In a tone like wavering willow,
:In a color like mellowing meadow.
:Till the sun flees.
:Cello panics and pleas:
:Shadow, shadow, stay with me!
:For I will sing you nightly glee.
:And my strings will never pluck sorrow,
:..........
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 哈哈哈, 试着按照你的建议写, 有悠扬的感觉吗? 还是像顺口溜 :D
| n******8 发帖数: 558 | 5 写的是 chinglish, 每一个明天 :D
【在 t******g 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 有 every tomorrow 的说法吗? : : :Cello and his shadow : :A lonely cello, : :Talks to no one but his shadow. : :In a tone like wavering willow, : :In a color like mellowing meadow. : :Till the sun flees. : :Cello panics and pleas: : :Shadow, shadow, stay with me!
| wh 发帖数: 141625 | 6 我也不懂哎,对诗一向不大有感觉……稍觉得韵脚好像太密集;mellowing meadow很好
玩,但不知道是不是像顺口溜了。:) 我去问问别人。
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】![](/moin_static193/solenoid/img/up.png) : 哈哈哈, 试着按照你的建议写, 有悠扬的感觉吗? 还是像顺口溜 :D
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