n******8
发帖数: 558 | 1 Ceiling
I stare at a light blue ceiling.
It’s been there since my life’s beginning.
The painted clouds in the ceiling are still and shy,
make me imagine the peaceful sky,
the peaceful sky as told by a sage,
whose wise words never fade or age.
He warns me not to look out the window,
cause the real sky brings torrent of rain and blizzard of snow.
I heed his warning, but my ears hear raining,
drop by drop, a melody bouncing off the ceiling.
I heed his warning, but my heart keeps yearning,
day by day, for the real sky rather than the ceiling.
使劲引申， 和政治也有关 ：D | wh
发帖数: 141625 | 2 哈，国内国外都可引申？
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Ceiling
: I stare at a light blue ceiling.
: It’s been there since my life’s beginning.
: The painted clouds in the ceiling are still and shy,
: make me imagine the peaceful sky,
: the peaceful sky as told by a sage,
: whose wise words never fade or age.
: He warns me not to look out the window,
: cause the real sky brings torrent of rain and blizzard of snow.
: I heed his warning, but my ears hear raining,
| n******8
发帖数: 558 | 3 主要是天朝
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Ceiling
I stare at a light blue ceiling.
It’s been there since my life’s beginning.
The painted clouds are silent and shy,
make me imagine the peaceful sky,
the peaceful sky as told by a sage,
whose wise words never fade or age.
He warns me not to look out the window,
cause the real sky
brings torrent of rain and blizzard of snow.
I heed his warning,
but my ears hear raining,
drop by drop,
a melody penetrates the ceiling.
I heed his warning,
but my heart keeps yearning,
day by day,
to stare at the sky, not the ceiling.
But my ears hear raining,
tap by tap,
a rhythm vibrates the ceiling.
But my heart keeps yearning,
night by night,
to embrace the sky, not the ceiling.
【在 wh 的大作中提到】
: 哈，国内国外都可引申？
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