s**t
发帖数: 17016 | 1 In my hand
lay the green, quiet
avocado
with girl’s coldness and haughtiness.
Touching you gently
with my finger,
I knew I must wait.
Then suddenly,
you become soft, dark and wild,
the sign of ripeness.
Neither my passion
nor my tenderness cajoled you.
It is time did the job.
And now, you are ready
to be eaten.
So smooth, rich, so delicious
that only you are real in my mouth
and I can’t feel the existence
of my own tongue.
After such a great feast,
something will be added to my life,
and something will pass me by
forever. | L****o
发帖数: 1642 | 2 Good. Learned a new word, cajole. It is time that did the job? Or simply
Time did the job?
【在 s**t 的大作中提到】
: In my hand
: lay the green, quiet
: avocado
: with girl’s coldness and haughtiness.
: Touching you gently
: with my finger,
: I knew I must wait.
: Then suddenly,
: you become soft, dark and wild,
: the sign of ripeness.
| b******e
发帖数: 34 | 3 把Avocado写得微妙，好玩
【在 s**t 的大作中提到】
: In my hand
: lay the green, quiet
: avocado
: with girl’s coldness and haughtiness.
: Touching you gently
: with my finger,
: I knew I must wait.
: Then suddenly,
: you become soft, dark and wild,
: the sign of ripeness.
| s**t
发帖数: 17016 | 4 都行。 Time did the job更简洁老练一些。It is time 有种暗示效果，让人不自觉地
想到It is time to do something
simply
【在 L****o 的大作中提到】
: Good. Learned a new word, cajole. It is time that did the job? Or simply
: Time did the job?
| s**t
发帖数: 17016 | 5 谢谢
【在 b******e 的大作中提到】
: 把Avocado写得微妙，好玩
| s**t
发帖数: 17016 | 6 还是你的建议好。time did the job，更舒服。
simply
【在 L****o 的大作中提到】
: Good. Learned a new word, cajole. It is time that did the job? Or simply
: Time did the job?
| w*a
发帖数: 2138 | 7 你写的都像哲学诗，呵呵。
【在 s**t 的大作中提到】
: In my hand
: lay the green, quiet
: avocado
: with girl’s coldness and haughtiness.
: Touching you gently
: with my finger,
: I knew I must wait.
: Then suddenly,
: you become soft, dark and wild,
: the sign of ripeness.
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